30 lemons Challenge #1: "Anatomical," Al/Danny, NC-17

[mistr3ssquickly]

Yay-hey for the porning hour! All y'all whom I told earlier tonight that I was going to bed? Well that pissed-off little Alphonse!muse of mine overheard that and decided that sleep wasn't in my future. Bastard muse.

So I stayed up and wrote this and double-yay, I'm now going to bed. Goodnight.

(P.S.: This is my attempt to cheat at 30_lemons prompt #1, "

Comments

[lifeinahole27]

oh holy crap this is the first porn i've read as a twenty-two year old and i'm so glad it was yours!

i loved every word of this. your description of alphonse was just gorgeous. and danny's inner thoughts rock my world. <3<3<3

[mistr3ssquickly]

GAH. I really did know it was your birthday, I swear! I just kinda ... forgot? Deleted the alert from my email? Failed at life?

Anywho, HAPPY BIRTHDAY! I'm kinda glad that my porn was the first porn of your 22nd year .. that makes me happy. *hugs*

Glad you liked, hon! Thanks for reading! ♥

~m

[lifeinahole27]

*hugs* thank you dear. and i wouldn't have liked it any other way than reading MQ porn as soon as i turned 22. XD

[mistr3ssquickly]

*snerk* Dude, I spent my 22nd birthday freakin' teaching. Although now that I think about it, I think I was ... yeah. Writing porn. Two chapters of Voyeurism, actually. >_>

So here's to porn for the 22nd year of life! May it forever live on as a tradition. XD

~m

[lifeinahole27]

you are a silly silly mistr3ss. XD

thank you dear. ^______^

[mistr3ssquickly]

*snickers* Yeah, but you love me anyway. XD And I DID have all intention to write you a birthday fic ... I just forgot.

Happy birthday, hon! Have a great one! ♥

~m

[lifeinahole27]

lol it's okay. and it ended up being a good birthday after all. very... low key ^_^ which is what i wanted.

[goldphish_bowl]

so porny, but still so unbelievably sweet! X3 they're so adorable when you write them--worn around the edges from life, but still so fluffy and loving <3

'made to be fucked'--i remember that conversation, though the memory's got that damn cat-eared cadet up in arms and hissing. silly archer needs to get laid.

[mistr3ssquickly]

Worn around the edges from far too much lovin', more likely. They're my favorites and they know it. XD I'm glad you liked the fu--er, fluff, dear! ♥

*pets cat-eared cadet* Silly boy, don't hiss! XD

Glad you liked the fic, hon! Thanks for reading!

~m

[sailormac]

GODDAMN, but you write hot pr0n. Seriously. Everything about this story just *drips* heat and need, but in the end, it's just sweet and loving, too. And you got *character* in there, too, with Danny contrasting his feelings about Al's armor body and his real one. Beautiful.

[mistr3ssquickly]

*^_^* I'm glad you like my porn, hon. Porn's good for the muses, and good for me ... made Al forget about his little voodoo dolls long enough for me to hide all of them.

Regarding Al's armor body ... I think it'd be weird, meeting someone first when they were nothing but an animated suit of armor, then eventually having sex with them when they're in a human body. Really, that strikes me as very disconcerting. >>

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked! ♥

~m

[faerie_speak]

SQUEE!

^^ Do you think this makes the Al!muse forgive you yet? I'll bake him a strawberry pie once he stops trying to kill voodoo dolls of you, I promised him that!

But, seriously, this was lovely, and oh-so animalistic, but rough can be just as sweet as the slow and methodical and touchy-feely scenes. I think a lot of people would "get" this more if they 1.) wrote it with as much realism as you do, and 2.) realized that sex isn't all fluffy sweetness ALL the time. Gay couples are real couples too, and real couples like to rough it up a bit. Who wants to be painstakingly-gentle all the time?

I liked Danny's POV in this, and his voice. I think his rememberance of Al in the armor was way awesome, seeing how far they've both come.

...Wow, okay, so, the pun there was NOT intended, but you know what I mean.

...Your muses are snickering at me now, aren't they?

[mistr3ssquickly]

I distracted Al with porn and stole all the voodoo dolls from him while he was molesting Danny. Don't know what to do with them now, though ... can't very well throw them out or bag them up without risk to my own health. >>

I'm so glad you liked this, hon! I'll be honest, I don't get gentle sex ... 's fun to write and think about, but when it comes down to it (pun totally intended), rough sex is just more fun. The muses seemed to be in agreement with me on that, and here's the result.

Danny say he and Al have come a long way. Al's snickering in the corner. Don't think Danny's quite caught on to the joke yet ... XD

Thanks for reading, hon! ♥

~m