Full Metal Alchemist, "Distance," Roy/Jean, PG

[mistr3ssquickly]

Happy Spying on Havoc Day! This isn't the porny little thing I had in mind for it to be, but it was still fun to write, and is closer to my idea of the characters than yesterday's story.

... and that's all I've got to say about it. Leave a comment if you read it, please!

Comments

[havocmangawip]

Oh wow... that was just wonderful. I love how Jean caught him sitting in that cab.

Very palpable angst on Roy's part there... I love how you wrote Havoc.

[mistr3ssquickly]

Jean's no idiot. He knows Roy comes to see him, just as he knows Roy can't deal with actually coming in to see him. Roy's an angsty little bastard, eh?

I'm glad you liked this, hon! Thank you for reading! ♥

~m

Distance

[anonymous]

Wow, this is just Jean's day to catch peeople spying, hehehe. that was an awesome story, i love how you wrote the characters and it was so sad. Happy Spying on Havoc Day!

chibikaze

Re: Distance

[mistr3ssquickly]

Haha, yeah. I was going to do a fic where he was unaware of being watched, 'cause I figured lots of folks would write/draw him aware of the spying, but then the Muses took over the fic and wouldn't let me have any say in it.

I'm glad you liked how the story turned out, hon. Thanks for reading! ♥

~m

[pockygirl]

... ;_;
*snuggles roy*
*and havo*
more coherentness later.

[mistr3ssquickly]

They need the snuggles, definitely. I have such a love/hate relationship with this timeline ...

*hands you back your coherentness* You may need that ... XD

~m

[sailormac]

Maybe you have a love-hate relationship with the manga timeline because there's no Russell in it? ~_^

[mistr3ssquickly]

Hahaha, among other things, yes. XDDD

~m

[flamemetal89]

oh man, who in the hell came up with these days? xD This is lovely though babe, I love Havoc's phone call - so sweet ♥

[mistr3ssquickly]

I found out about them on y!gallery. They're great fun ... a week of writing prompts!

I'm glad you liked the story, hon. Thanks for reading! ♥

~m

[sailormac]

Very clever of Havoc, to figure out he was being spied on . . . but he probably knows Roy so well at this point that he probably knew it without even looking. Hopefully, they'll be able to get past Roy's very palpable guilt and resume their relationship.

(And it looks like you're doing the whole Havoc Week! I look forward to seeing the other installments!)

[mistr3ssquickly]

Honestly, I'm not sure Havoc did know it was Roy. I had in mind that he saw the car, wondered, and had his suspicions confirmed when he called and Riza told him Roy was out of the office for the day.

As for Roy's guilt ... he and Edward could compete for who's got more to get over, don't you think?

I'm glad you liked this, hon! Definitely lots of Havoc coming up for the rest of this week! ♥

~m