Full Metal Alchemist, "Distance," Roy/Jean, PG

Apr 25, 2007 14:09

Happy Spying on Havoc Day! This isn't the porny little thing I had in mind for it to be, but it was still fun to write, and is closer to my idea of the characters than yesterday's story.

... and that's all I've got to say about it. Leave a comment if you read it, please!

Distance )

riza, havoc, breda, fma, pg, roy, fanfiction, fury

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secretfreaky April 26 2007, 12:56:17 UTC
Waaaaah! That was *snif* just *snurf* so beautiful! *wipes upe tears from desk* Definitely a keeper in my memories.

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mistr3ssquickly April 26 2007, 23:03:39 UTC
Oh I'm so glad you liked it, dear. Havoc from the manga is just so sad, I'm with you on the sniffling. But for some reason, I love writing him like this ...

Thank you for reading and mem'ing! I'm really glad you liked the story! ♥

~m

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crystal_lilly April 26 2007, 15:01:45 UTC
Wow. So totally not what I was expecting but wonderful anyway.

Question: are your Havoc stories for this week all connected or do they stand separately?

This one makes me hurt for both of them... you know, Roy probably needed counseling after Jean's paralysis but we all know he wouldn't go in for it voluntarily. The guilt must be eating at him. It is hard enough for the person who IS paralyzed to accept it, but family and friends often feel guilty or upset as well. I like how you show Havoc being all accepting and moving on, but Roy is still stuck clinging to his faint hope of a magical 'cure'. *shakes head*

Ah, Roy. *gives in and cuddles him*

See... now you inspire the weirdest urges in me. Seriously. I have never before wanted to see a wheel-chair bound Jean snuggling with a half-naked Roy. Kudos to you for that mental image... and thanks for sharing this one.

Although, usually after your more intense stories, I need to read pure, unadulterated fluff. *wandering off to find some now*

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mistr3ssquickly April 26 2007, 23:16:44 UTC
Yeah, I had in mind that Roy and Jean would screw like kinky rabbits while Jean was on a spy mission. See how well THAT worked out for me? >_<

Answer: So far, they all stand alone. I'll make a note in the comments if one turns up that goes with another.

Oooh. Your comments always bring up stuff that's never occurred to me. Yes, absolutely Roy would need counselling ... hell the man needed counselling after the war in Ishbal, but probably refused to get it. *pets plotbunny* Jean, you're right, has accepted his new life and moved on ... it's been three years, after all.

I will see what I can do for you on the Jean-snuggling-half-naked-Roy front. This is such an interesting notion ... mmm.

As for the fluff ... I deliver. ^_^

Thank you so much for the thoughtful comment, hon! You're a helluva chica. ♥

~m

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enigmaroolz April 27 2007, 02:29:19 UTC
Awwwww! Sooooo good! Sooooo good! And I loved your "Strip Havoc Naked" story, too! My school has put a block on all blog sites because some of the students were being stupid on My Space. Hence, I can no longer read my LJ at school! --pout-- I'm WAY behind in reading my friends' LJ's. If I miss something of yours, E-mail it to me, will you, pweeeeeaaaasssseeee?

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mistr3ssquickly April 27 2007, 03:11:40 UTC
I'm so glad you liked this, hon! It's refreshing to write mangaverse Jean every so often ... I've missed him.

Regarding the no blogs at school ... I think that's wise. My students are never responsible when we let them have computer access. Drives me bananas. As for missing stuff ... my LJ is devoted almost wholly to my writing. Just go to mistr3ssquickly.livejournal.com and read through until you hit something you've already read. XD

Thank you for reading, hon! ♥

~m

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mistr3ssquickly April 30 2007, 22:58:23 UTC
I'm so glad you liked this, dear. Like you, I rarely read stuff that's not NC-17, so I'm very glad you gave this a chance, and liked it.

Thanks for reading! ♥

~m

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ladyshadowphyre May 11 2007, 20:05:18 UTC
~completely random~ You know, ever since my parents started repeatedly watching Nanny McFee in the den next to the office, I keep thinking of bees whenever I see your name?

~adds this fic to her Mems since she's recently developed a fondness for Jean/Roy~

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mistr3ssquickly May 11 2007, 23:49:14 UTC
I ... don't get it. Bees? Me? *lost*

I'm glad you like the pairing and the story, though! Thanks for reading! ♥

~m

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ladyshadowphyre May 11 2007, 23:55:01 UTC
One of the characters in the movie is a woman named "Mrs Quickly". It's not a flattering comparison, unfortunately.

I'm glad you like the pairing and the story, though!

I have to admit, I like Roy/Jean a whole lot more than I tolerate Roy/Riza. I just... can't really see that pairing for a lot of the same reasons I can't ever see Ed/Winry.

And it's always a pleasure to read your writing, hon!

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mistr3ssquickly May 12 2007, 00:22:02 UTC
Ooooooooh. Gotcha!

Mistr3ss Quickly (well, Mistress Quickly, but that name was already taken) is from the Shakespeare play Henry IV part I. She's a helluva woman, tells the prince to his face not to treat her like a woman, because she as a woman deserves better.

She's my hero. ♥

Ed/Winry ... just no. That's like incest, really. I love them as best friends, but sexually, I really just don't see it. At all. And as for Roy/Riza, the fans of that pairing tend to be so batshit, I'm just not interested in being involved in it. *sigh*

*blushes* I'm glad you like my stuff, hon! Thank you so much. ♥

~m

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