Deathnote, "One Hundred Percent," L/Light, NC-17

Jun 22, 2006 11:19

Inspired by wicked_pistil's hilariously technical fiction Textbook Example, this is a piece that just kinda happened while I was trying to sleep. Fic won, sleep lost.

Oh well. This is dedicated with absolute love to melfinalupin, who wanted Deathnote fic. She's adorable and I love her, so here's what she wanted (I hope). NC-17 for not worksafe-ness, and it's probably best ( Read more... )

fanfiction, deathnote, l, nc-17, light

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sailormac June 22 2006, 15:45:36 UTC
Wow. The sex aside (hot as always), you do a *great* job of getting into the head of Death Note-less Light -- the basic personality traits that made him Kira are still *there* (I never entirely bought the theory that the Death Note was an evil thing that "possessed" him). And the relationship feels on-target -- fascination and a bit of hatred and a strange companionship, but no *mush*, which is exactly as it should be.

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mistr3ssquickly June 22 2006, 17:42:38 UTC
I was trying to fall asleep, and in the back of my mind, my L!muse said: "Wouldn't it confuse Yagami Light to not know he was a killer, even if he was?"

Not conducive to sleeping, that muse. I'm so glad you liked this, dear. One of the things that frustrated me about the Deathnote falling into other people's hands, in the canon, was that none had Light's personality, which I thought was perfectly suited for being a reaper. It's good to know that that came through as I'd intended.

No mush, and my L!muse is nodding vigorously. We still won't let Light come into the aparment. He's not welcomed.

Thank you for reading, hon! ♥

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moontyger June 22 2006, 17:11:25 UTC
Yay, you actually wrote them having sex! I enjoyed this a lot. :)

Now you make me want to go work on my 30_lemons claim for them instead of my dn_challenge fic... hmm...

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mistr3ssquickly June 22 2006, 17:44:43 UTC
Haha, I'm glad you liked it. It was pretty much inevitable that I'd write them actually screwing, I think we all knew that ... : )

If you'd like help with your 30_lemons pieces, please feel free to IM me at RussTringham (AIM) or Mistr3ssQuickly (YM). I'm the queen at finding ways to "cheat" on the prompts, making them writable in canon.

Thanks for reading me, dear! ♥

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moontyger June 22 2006, 19:53:29 UTC
True, but still enjoyable and always nice to see! ^_~

If you'd like help with your 30_lemons pieces, please feel free to IM me at RussTringham (AIM) or Mistr3ssQuickly (YM). I'm the queen at finding ways to "cheat" on the prompts, making them writable in canon.

Thanks! The hard part for the current one is I am trying to write it from Ryuk's PoV (for "the audience") - very difficult!

Thanks for reading me, dear! ♥

Ah, but your fics are always worth reading! ♥

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mistr3ssquickly June 22 2006, 17:45:50 UTC
I'm so glad you've enjoyed reading what I write, dear. Deathnote fascinates me, as much as it disappoints me, so it's good to know that I'm not the only one enjoying it. ^_^

Thanks for reading! ♥

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havocmangawip June 22 2006, 18:07:22 UTC
Now I have to start reading "Death Note". Gah.

One more series to love on.

Just knowing the premise behind it, this was hot. Wow.

*Breda and Jean talking... Jean and Roy smexing... it invades your brain.*

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mistr3ssquickly June 22 2006, 18:57:04 UTC
Haha, Deathnote's good through chapter 58. That's all I'm sayin'.

I'm so glad you liked this fic, hon! Sadly, none of this happens, canon, but ... yeah. That's what we've got fandom for, right?

Yeah yeah, Jean'll get some smexin' next ... XD

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feast June 22 2006, 18:18:41 UTC
Absolutely wonderful. ♥

The sex was hot, but not just that, the characterization is wonderful. Their relationship, as you portrayed it, is totally IC. I just love how you write Light/L. :)

Great job, as always. You've definitely gotten yourself a new fangirl!

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mistr3ssquickly June 22 2006, 18:58:41 UTC
I'm so glad you liked this, sweetie! I was honestly very very worried about the characterizations, so it's REALLY good to know that you thought they were on tap with the canon characters.

Thank you so much for reading me! And I'm glad to have you as a fangirl! *smooch* ♥

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