Deathnote, "One Hundred Percent," L/Light, NC-17

Jun 22, 2006 11:19

Inspired by wicked_pistil's hilariously technical fiction Textbook Example, this is a piece that just kinda happened while I was trying to sleep. Fic won, sleep lost.

Oh well. This is dedicated with absolute love to melfinalupin, who wanted Deathnote fic. She's adorable and I love her, so here's what she wanted (I hope). NC-17 for not worksafe-ness, and it's probably best ( Read more... )

fanfiction, deathnote, l, nc-17, light

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childhoodfriend June 22 2006, 18:52:30 UTC
Oh wow. This one was awesome. It's my favorite of yours so far. ^ ^

I really liked it. As usual, they were both IC, which is very important in fics. You did a great job.

You just got yourself another fangirl. You're another queen of my fandom! ^_^

Of course, great sex. I can't wait to read your next one! :3

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mistr3ssquickly June 22 2006, 19:02:05 UTC
*blush* Thank you so much! I'm so glad to know that the boys are in-character in this ... I was worried they'd stray from their canon forms because of the extenuating circumstances sex presents.

*luffles you* I do so love finding fangirls. Y'all's what makes the writing really fun.

Thank you for reading me, dear! ♥

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wicked_pistil June 22 2006, 19:45:44 UTC
Would it be blasphemy if I said your Death Note writing is my favorite of everything you've done?

Your handle on these boys is fantastic. Sparkling, dazzling characterization. And your work with metaphor and theme in this fandom makes me squee like the English-major dork that I am.

I love the theme of 100% in this, that you wrote the period when Light doesn't have the book. That is my favorite part of the manga, when you see him revert back to "innocent," but still seeing those elements of his personality that make it clear how he becomes Kira. You know that he would have been a sadistic dick, death note or no.

Just love this to bits. ^^

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mistr3ssquickly June 23 2006, 04:28:17 UTC
Haha, not blasphemy at all. Just personal preference. Just like, for all the complaints that my Russel/Ed isn't as good as other people's, it will always still be my personal favorite. I'm just really glad you like my Deathnote stuff so much!

I was fascinated by the time Light spent without the Deathnote (to me, he never got it back, because I skipped forward from like 52 to 59, then got pissed and quit reading all together), and wondered just how much of Kira Light would retain. This was my exploration of that, and I'm SO glad you liked it!

Mmm sadistic!Light ... just how L likes him. ^_~

Thank you for reading me, dear. I'm so very very pleased that you liked this story! ♥

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chrstphrl June 22 2006, 22:13:30 UTC
This is so awesome. The sex is hot, as always, but Light's inner thoughts make it. I love the complicated but un-romantic relationship. Beautiful.

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mistr3ssquickly June 23 2006, 04:30:34 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it, sweetie. Light strikes me as the kind of guy who wouldn't be able to shut his brain off, even during sex with someone as hot as L.

Thank you so much for reading me! *snuggle*

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equvilantexchgn June 23 2006, 04:30:16 UTC
LOVE.

I adore L, very much so. This was adorable, hot, sweet and very nice. I love this alot and I can't wait to read DN more. ^_^ New Pairing!



~C

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mistr3ssquickly June 23 2006, 04:36:33 UTC
I'm glad you liked this, hon! L is definitely just LOVE. Mmm ...

Mwahahaha, I have roped you into another pairing! *does victory dance*

Thanks for reading me, dear! ♥

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lifeinahole27 June 23 2006, 07:28:01 UTC
i'm sure i just spoiled allll sorts of things for myself... but i can understand the idea behind it and i loved this. the following theme of light's thoughts and l's logic. i feel as if i've used far too many "l"s in this comment. okay, one more... love this!!

~Sar

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mistr3ssquickly June 23 2006, 14:33:33 UTC
I'm so glad you liked this, hon. No, not too many spoilers here ... but it *will* make more sense, once you've read this section. Light doesn't know that he *was* Kira, here, so that's the big thing that most ppl who've not read the manga are missing.

I'm really glad you liked it! Thank you for reading! ♥

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