castle fic; criminal of desire

[missymeggins]

criminal of desire | Castle; kate beckett/serena kaye | 5550 words | r (for language) | au. serena's an art thief; kate's in private security.

Comments

[lab_brat]

That was amazingly awesome! I love it. I love the chase between them, the "stolen" moments and their conversations, how they both changed over the course of the story. The moments with the boys made me laugh too. Very well written! :D

[missymeggins]

Thank you so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

[niuxita21]

ASHSJHFKHDSFKDHKFHSKDHDKSJHDKHDK I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUU. ♥ Satisfying our fantasies of pretty women making out and being awesome is totally the BEST reason to write crack fic, ever.

LOVED that you had Kate actually "sort of" dating Castle. I was kinda hoping you would so that made me squee a little. Poor Castle, he went the way of Josh in this AU. :P

I think my favourite part was the birthday at Kate's apartment. I love how you managed to turn a scene between two characters who have barely had an episode's worth of screentime together into something so touching and heartbreaking. The And then this:

But in the morning she wakes alone. The worst thing is, she's not even surprised.

So painful, but so good.

I totally thought Beckett driving the getaway car was gonna be the beginning of their happy ending, so when she disappeared in the other car I was like, NOOOOOOOOOO. But LOVED the twist of Kate making Serena chase her and the ACTUAL ending was the sweetest thing ever. Serena reaches for Kate's hand and grips it tightly. “You

[missymeggins]

ASDFGHJKL I'm just so glad you liked it!!! And yes, satisfying our fantasies of pretty women making out is definitely the best reason to write crack fic heeeee.

OMG I'm so glad you were hoping for that! Ha. I just wanted to put as many little references in there to tie it to the Castle universe we know. But yeah, he totally got shafted lol. And same with Ryan and Esposito, it felt important to have them there even if it was just a little bit.

Btw, did you spot the references to Kate's hair being in a bun? LOL

I'm just so glad you encouraged me to write it! I don't think I would have ever tried something so au if you hadn't. <3

[niuxita21]

IT IS. You've actually encouraged me to try and finish the Beckett/five awesome ladies crack fic I've had in the works for a while (that is, if the logistics ever cooperate and I think up two more ladies to slash her with). Yay crack fic!

Btw, did you spot the references to Kate's hair being in a bun? LOL

I totally did, hahaha. I especially loved how you pointedly stated that Serena thought it looked so sexy. Well played. :P (But in the rest of the fic she had her hair down in my head because I was too busy flailing at all the lady-kissing that I didn't even think about it. Hee.)

Aww, always! <3 I'm glad you had so much fun writing it. :D

[missymeggins]

YEEEEEESSS PLEASE FINISH IT! I'd love it. Who were the women you were doing again? Lorelai I remember but not the others lol.

Heeee. Yeah, I figure it was out the rest of the time too. Especially at fancy events, I'm sure it was her usual amazing hairporny waves!

HERE, HAVE A .GIF PARTY

[effie214]

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[missymeggins]

PANCAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAKES! I love you bb. <3

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[effie214]

I THINK IT'S SAFE TO SAY I LOVE YOU MORE.

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[missymeggins]

I'm now back to working on that Castle/Haven piece. Because apparently now I only write crack. Ladidadida.

[missymeggins]

I'm so glad someone else agrees! Gorgeous ladies need all the love. And this was just so much fun to write heee.

I'm glad you appreciated that ;D

[cartographical]

Um. I thought I was only into Castle/Beckett but this is TEH BOMB, it is fun and hot and idk how you just made me like this so much but you really, really did.

[missymeggins]

THANK YOU! That's a fantastic compliment. I'm really glad you did enjoy it! I had so much fun writing it hehe.