Comments | missyjack: Challenge #46 That River in Egypt

missyjack

Challenge #46 That River in Egypt

Nov 03, 2006 21:38

Title: That River In Egypt

Author: missyjack

Rating: pg-13

Character: Dean, Sam

Genre: gen

Spoilers: ep to S201

Disclaimer: Kripke owns everything

A/N: Two stories written for supernatural100 drabble challenge #46 Denial

One.

A cute girl in every town. That’s all I need

What I want is a woman to love me and accept me for who I am.

Sammy? He’s not like those ( Read more... )

drabble

Comments 12

plutogirl10 November 3 2006, 10:59:48 UTC

Except some of those things aren’t quite evil; and some people are.

Love the phrasing; perfectly highlight Dean's turmoil from bloodlust onwards.

You were hugging your pillow and crying!

LOL : P that's so cute!

missyjack November 3 2006, 11:05:47 UTC

thanks!

random_serious November 3 2006, 12:10:14 UTC

Fa.bu.lous. The first is heartbreaking, and you manage to capture Dean and who he is and what situation he is in, with just few words. The second is funny, and it is fabulous how you used Beaches... Fabulous.

missyjack November 3 2006, 13:04:45 UTC

*big smile*
thank you muchly

eboniorchid November 3 2006, 14:57:34 UTC

Yay! Someone explained how Dean watched "Beaches". It's also funny to think about the parallel/juxtaposing of the two brothers' personalities and what they got "caught" watching. I mean, Sam was unexpectedly watching porn, and Dean was unexpectedly watching a chick flick, with like teary eyes and everything. YAYZ!

The first one really gets to the heart of Dean and I love it. It makes me wonder how much Dean is in denial about these things himself (lying to himself about what he needs/thinks/feels), versus how much he just puts up these shields and façades to try to keep those hidden thoughts from Sam.

missyjack November 4 2006, 01:28:08 UTC

interesting point about Dean and denial. a combination of these two things i think.
and i think Dean is a bit of a shmoopy movie watcher - i have just done a list of movies the boys have mentioned in S2 and its very interesting.

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missyjack November 4 2006, 01:28:39 UTC

he is so watching chick flicks in secret!

gwendolen November 4 2006, 00:15:22 UTC

Wow, nice.

I especially like the first one, the two sides of Dean. the things he shows to the outside and what's going on inside. Very nicely done. You did a great job of capturing that dichotomy.

The second one just made me love.

gwendolen November 4 2006, 00:15:55 UTC

That should be laugh not love.

missyjack November 4 2006, 01:29:01 UTC

Laugh, love it's all the same:)
thanks