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missyjack

Aftertaste

Sep 24, 2006 18:07

Title: Aftertaste
Author: missyjack
Rating: pg-13
Genre: gen, drabble
Disclaimer: Kripke owns everything
A/N: Three stories written for supernatural100 drabble challenge #40 Taste. Post Devil'sTrap (No spoilers)

One.
The Impala lies by the side of the road lay, a twisted wreck of steel painted with blood. Inside, flesh intersects with metal, and ( Read more... )

drabble, gen

Comments 14

ellipsisblack September 24 2006, 08:38:40 UTC

Wah, ouch. To all of them. The second one is just. Amazing. Wow. That is an awesome metaphor.

missyjack September 24 2006, 08:41:43 UTC

Thanks. I've promised myself I won't hurt them any more before the season opener.

juicephine September 24 2006, 10:04:00 UTC

Picking my favourites from the drabble chocolate box:

All the promises he’d ever made to them taste like grave dirt in his mouth.

Trust and loyalty and love and are the blackmarket currency of the Winchester emotional economy, and he’s sent them bankrupt.

he’s only once known fear and it tasted like loneliness.

Apparently I prefer bitter chocolate.

missyjack September 24 2006, 10:16:22 UTC

Thanks for enjoying my mixed assortment - I like dark bitter chocolate too!

astrothsknot September 24 2006, 10:41:59 UTC

I love emotional toughness and economy of the words. This is how drabbles should be written

missyjack September 24 2006, 10:48:24 UTC

That really means a lot to me. Thank you!

stormy_writer September 24 2006, 13:41:13 UTC

Thats was just WOW! I really enjoyed it.

missyjack September 24 2006, 13:54:40 UTC

Cheers. Thank you muchly.

stormy_writer September 24 2006, 14:10:58 UTC

Your welcome muchly.

I have to be honest though it was MUCH better than that finger porn you wrote with Jared, Jensen and Wentworth. There was just something about that one the I didn't really like. I'm not say the writing was poopy, I'm just saying what it was about kind of scared me. No offense to you?

missyjack September 24 2006, 14:20:14 UTC

No offense taken - the finger!porn story probably arose from one of the darker scarey bits of my brain my muse. And I don't ever expect to like everything one person writes!

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plutogirl10 September 25 2006, 06:40:50 UTC

I'm so confused. I remember reading the first one, but the second two look new : (

But I like them! : ) Dean, right? It's gotta be Dean, the poor, poor boy.

plutogirl10 September 25 2006, 06:42:35 UTC

at least the third one. that's gotta be dean. Did I just mass misinterpret your drabbles?

missyjack September 25 2006, 06:51:30 UTC

No, they were written with the possibility of them being any of the Winchesters. Which seems to have worked - different people read them as different narrators.

But I have to admit that I hear Dean when I read them.