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Nov 08, 2007 14:57

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Re: nice little coda missyjack November 8 2007, 23:39:01 UTC
it's a good point you make, although i don;t think the imagery of Sam dousing a fresh corpse with gas and salt and burning it would ahve quite fiot in with the mood here!

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tsuki_no_bara November 8 2007, 15:58:00 UTC
oh, ow. i really like how it starts off with such beautiful imagery - sleeping beauty, the chandelier moon - and then turns like *that*. it's very quiet and very hard and gets a lot across in not a lot of words.

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missyjack November 8 2007, 23:40:33 UTC
Thanks so much, i am so glad it worked for you, as I am often wary that imagery like this can sound cliched.

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britomart_is November 8 2007, 18:35:41 UTC
*blink*
Whoa.
Ow.

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missyjack November 8 2007, 23:40:47 UTC
Thank you!

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