Comments | missyjack: By your side

missyjack

By your side

May 08, 2007 20:08

Title: By your side
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missyjack May 8 2007, 13:48:12 UTC

Oh thanks sweetie!

*hands you chocolate*

geeky_ginger May 8 2007, 14:05:12 UTC

DUDE!!! Evil! But...sometimes evil is good....loved this. Very sweet.

missyjack May 8 2007, 22:04:40 UTC

Thank you so much.

estrella30 May 8 2007, 14:20:14 UTC

oh, this is awesome! mean and CRUEL, but awesome! *g*

missyjack May 8 2007, 22:05:19 UTC

I had to temper all the shmoop with a twist :) thanks!

random_serious May 8 2007, 14:27:59 UTC

Aaarrgghhh. This was great, both light and with gravity. I liked the play-by-play-Jaed -thorough-Jensen's-eyes -thing. So personal, and the character voice rang true.

missyjack May 9 2007, 07:24:16 UTC

That's lovely feedback, thank you.

anisapologist May 8 2007, 15:16:51 UTC

This was excellent. I love your Jensen! Just a little constructive Crit? You might want to re-phrase your last line, as they don't say 'winner' anymore. They say: 'The Oscar Goes to..."
Would looove to see a sequel to this--maybe a little lovin' after the Oscars? :)

missyjack May 8 2007, 22:06:48 UTC

Thanks - we'll see about a sequel.

(and thanks for the concrit - I've changed it to "Award" because for various reasons i didn't want it specifically to be about the Oscars)