The best actor set up is genius, but what really made it for me is the characterization of the boys during the early parts of their relationship. Your phrasing and the wording of jensen's thoughts rang so real and true.
ooh this is awesome. its very sweet and its cool to see someone that actually analyses their friendship rather than them just magically being best friends. so yeah this is awsome but i really didnt believe those were the actual lines kripke wrote before i checked it out. god its awful but he part that got me the most in that script he actually wrote 'you can take you anemic alt pop and shove it up your ass' god he is such a crack up but i am soo glad they got writers on the show that knew what they were doing plus can you imagine our boys as HARRISONS. it doesnt work.
Oh that last line is a killer! And though I really, really do want to know whether Jared won or not, I don't...
Since you mentioned this was pre-slash, does that perhaps mean you will have a sequel that is slash? Pretty please! *bats eyes*
This was just perfect. I loved how you handled Jensen's reaction to losing the lead to a kid, and then waiting for Jared's other side to show - only for it not to. Poor cynical Jensen. He just needs some lovin' from Jared to mellow him out.
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still love the fic!
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You ended it THERE?
But. But!
OH MY GOD I HATE YOU. (I mean that in the nicest possible way.)
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Since you mentioned this was pre-slash, does that perhaps mean you will have a sequel that is slash? Pretty please! *bats eyes*
This was just perfect. I loved how you handled Jensen's reaction to losing the lead to a kid, and then waiting for Jared's other side to show - only for it not to. Poor cynical Jensen. He just needs some lovin' from Jared to mellow him out.
Great story. Thanks so very much for sharing!
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