The Suit Makes the Man

[missnyah]

See what you made me do fic exchange?

For the Halloween exchange I was asked to write an E/S story that involved: Calculating Eric, jealous Sookie, banter, a strip club, and a cigarette. This is what happened...

Title: The Suit Makes the Man
Disclaimer: True Blood is not mine, nor am I affiliated.
Summary: Eric. Sookie. Strip club. Cigarette. How could

Comments

[caraway_]

You are a roll.

I was laughing from here on in:
I could hear a lot of people thinking it was pretty tasteless (and it was) but no one was about to shout “too soon” at the bouncer of Shreveport's only vampire bar on the best night of the year to be able to say you were at a vampire bar.

I REALLY want to see your Pam on the show.

Also, that was one of the hottest stories I've ever read without any sex (between the protagonists, that is).

[caraway_]

I mean, you are on a roll, not that you are a round piece of yeasted flour.

[gaialy]

Good story! ...maybe more than a one-shot:? :D

[missnyah]

Might be... I'm trying to make no promises until I finish "I Have Gone Out"

[desertwillow]

Wonderful as always. Would like to see more of this one if you decide to continue it.

One thing though: it's déjà vu, which means "already seen." Déjà vous would mean "already you" (formal). Former French major so it drives me nuts when I see bad French. But for some reason that mistake is oddly common...

[missnyah]

Ooo thanks for the grammar check. I get on people's cases all the time about word use in English. Thanks for reading and I'll give you a heads up if I continue.

[the_grynne]

An absolute delight to read. We can only hope S3 will be equally enjoyable.

[missnyah]

Thanks. It was kind of refreshing to write something so silly.

I have high hopes for season three but then, I'm one of those odd and seemingly rare book readers that (a few actors aside) really kind of likes the show better.

[devohoneybee]

nicely done, very enjoyable! :)

[missnyah]

Thanks very much!