FIC: All the Nice Girls (Andi/Hoynes)

[littleloonlost]

Title: All the Nice Girls
Rating: arr?
Pairing: John Hoynes/Andi Wyatt (spelling provided by the memegen in keeping with my inability to commit *g*)
Spoilers: Full Disclosure
Disclaimer: I think everybody knows they're not mine.
Notes: Set in the latter days of the first campaign. Many thanks go out to the fabulous docfraiser8.

Comments

[soaked_in_stars]

God, that's fabulous. I keep trying to pick lines out of it and say 'THIS is my favorite' but I can't, I love it all, and I can see her clearly throughout. And Hoynes, guh. I have this thing about either Andy or Toby cheating, I just can never see it, but you've done it, you've made it believable to me. Nice freaking work, love.

[littleloonlost]

YAY. I'm veryvery pleased that it worked for you because I trust you to know about the sense of such things. ;) Thank you big much.

[cheapmetaphor]

Wow, this is incredible. The style of it is amazing, phrases that I've never seen before but come out so right. And I love how clear CJ and Toby were on the edges of it.

And it's hot, just plain hot.

[littleloonlost]

Mmm, that's ever so yummy to hear. Thank you, I'm delighted that you like it.

[keladryb]

You know, I saw 'Andy/Hoynes' and nearly didn't click, because I couldn't imagine it being pulled off in a way I could find palatable, and as you're one of those author's I adore, I just didn't wnat to be disapointed, if that makes any sense. But then I clicked and read anyway.

Yeah, so completely not disapointed.

This is why I love your writing, the way you twist and weave lanugauge into a rich and believable tapestry, the kind with layers of depth not visible until you step closer.

Very nice.

[littleloonlost]

Wow, those are certainly comments to treasure. I'm touched. It's ironic: everyone was sceptical about the pairing (and certainly I'd never have dreamed of it without prompting) but as soon as it came up in the meme, this wrote itself. And that hasn't happened for me in at least two years. It's bizarre what sparks you up.

Thanks very much. :)

[docfraiser8]

::love::
See? Waffling was unnecessary.
It's fabulous. It truly is.

[littleloonlost]

*hugs*

Thanks for everything, love.

[ninefish]

Absolutely stunning. So beautifully written, the poetry in the phrasing, the pacing of the story, all the while relating crystal-clear characterizations. LOVE!

This bit:

To experience him in action, you'd think unlocking women's legs really only takes a simple combination that only he knows. Thinking of it like that saves you from thinking about why.

floors me. In two sentences you've completely nailed both characters. So impressive.

[littleloonlost]

Ooh, you are lovely. Thanks so much; I'm very glad you liked it and am suitably warm and fuzzy now. :)