FIC: All the Nice Girls (Andi/Hoynes)

[littleloonlost]

Title: All the Nice Girls
Rating: arr?
Pairing: John Hoynes/Andi Wyatt (spelling provided by the memegen in keeping with my inability to commit *g*)
Spoilers: Full Disclosure
Disclaimer: I think everybody knows they're not mine.
Notes: Set in the latter days of the first campaign. Many thanks go out to the fabulous docfraiser8.

Comments

[krazykitkat]

I didn't think this would work, but you made it. Marvellous.

And particularly adore:

It doesn't change the way you see yourself, and CJ, although you realise that she probably did it because she loved your husband and you did it because you don't. Not as you used to.

[littleloonlost]

Thank you! Glad it worked for you. It so easily could have gone the other way. *g*

I struggled over that bit because I don't really believe CJ slept with Hoynes because of Toby, but it just seemed to fit. Maybe Andi's paranoid. Besides, I suppose the joy of fanfic is that we get to try out various interpretations.

[38gnihsurc]

wow. i love this. you did an incredible job with the pairing.

(and soaked_in_stars just told me you claim you can't write andy --- your andy is very lovely and andylike. liar ;p)

♥

[littleloonlost]

Hee! Claire's a tell-tale. ;) I do struggle with the character (she was never all that developed on the show and yet people still have very fixed ideas about her), so it's very encouraging that she was recognisable here. Thank you. :)

[38gnihsurc]

(She is -- but for good things! lol.)

[jackmaybenimble]

Oh this is just exquisitely wonderful....I can't pin my favorite bit because I love it all from the tip of its hair to its pointy-shoed toes. Adorable.

[littleloonlost]

SHOES! Or, thank you. So glad you liked. :)

[michellek]

This is fantastic.

[littleloonlost]

Thank you. It was pretty random and I'm glad it worked for you.