Memory Coin

Aug 10, 2010 23:56

Title: Memory Coin
Pairing: Jia / Min
Rating: PG-13
Words Count: 1518 (why are my fics so short these days? T_T)
Genre: Angst / friendship
Summary: "If, one of these days, I see you and you don't see me, I'll throw a coin at you."

A/N: IS CAROLINE CRAZY!? OH YES SHE IS! Two fics posted in one day, I AM ON FIREEEE!! (Okay, I said it already, I'm sorry ( Read more... )

fandom: miss a, !fanfic, pairing: jia/min

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taylorrenee_ily August 11 2010, 05:14:24 UTC
SPOT! Ok going to finish my fic, and then I'll read yours XD

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taylorrenee_ily August 11 2010, 17:48:10 UTC
This was amazing♥.

Their friendship was so sweet and Min was such a well-developed character and everything just kind of fit seamlessly together. It was really an amazing fic!

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taylorrenee_ily August 11 2010, 17:50:37 UTC
And I totally would've quoted all the awesome things and made this a longer comment, but when I reply to my comments it doesn't show me the fic, so I can't copy-paste from it! :( Idk if it's the layout or if I'm just so technologically stupid that I'm screwing things up without even knowing I am. -_-

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taylorrenee_ily August 11 2010, 18:16:43 UTC
OKAY I AM NOT ANONYMOUS.

So that's why it was doing it... the site kept logging me out for some reason. U_U

“I know. But it annoys me. It makes me want to throw a coin at their head to make them notice me.”
Hahah aww Jia♥ it's such a child-like thing to say. She's adorable. :)

Why did she have to be the one to break everything? She had broken her budget, and a few of her dreams along with it, she had broken a lot of people's heart without intending to. Why did she have to be the one to break this relationship, as damaged and miserable as it already was?
I really like how you made Min miserable. Lol I'm a horrible person, but I think it makes the fic a lot more interesting. And I like the logic here, too (as twisted as it is). It's definitely understandable in a non-obvious way. :)

The music was loud. The air was thick and smelled of sweat, alcohol and vomit.
EEEEEEW. :( This makes me never want to go to a bar. :(

And I'd quote the ending, but then I'd quote the whole ending. XD

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akinoyui August 11 2010, 10:18:18 UTC
sweet~

Reading this..I do wish I have a good friend, like someone I feel comfortable with and I can just rant and talk about my problems...*sigh* sadly I don't.. (opps..I shouldn't be complaining here... :P)

argh...I hate boys that cheats..they are just..blergh..anyways, me likey <3 the coin throwing part is awesome though ^^

last but not least, poor Suzy. HAHA!

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misschatelle August 11 2010, 14:49:41 UTC
I'm lucky enough to have friends like that, but I'm sometimes surprised that I do. I'm so shy and reserved, I never really go towards people. I was really lucky to meet my friends ( ... )

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wooyeong August 14 2010, 05:10:11 UTC
ahh i'm so glad i checked the fic comms today
jia/min is also really cute♥(:
i do hope you write something fluffy sometime~ XD
anyways, your miss a fics are awesome,
and i hope to see more because i haven't seen any yet :\
:))

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misschatelle August 14 2010, 05:57:36 UTC
This was meant to be a fluffy fic. I swear it was. T__T
It never turns out the way I intend it to. >.>

But yeah, I'm experimenting with the miss A pairings right now. It's pretty fun! 8D
And hopefully the next one will be happier. -_-

Thank you so much for your support and lovely comments!!^^

(And yeah, I haven't seen any other miss a fic so far...)

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