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Memory Coin

Aug 10, 2010 23:56

Title: Memory Coin
Pairing: Jia / Min
Rating: PG-13
Words Count: 1518 (why are my fics so short these days? T_T)
Genre: Angst / friendship
Summary: "If, one of these days, I see you and you don't see me, I'll throw a coin at you."

A/N: IS CAROLINE CRAZY!? OH YES SHE IS! Two fics posted in one day, I AM ON FIREEEE!! (Okay, I said it already, I'm sorry ( Read more... )

fandom: miss a, !fanfic, pairing: jia/min

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taylorrenee_ily August 11 2010, 05:14:24 UTC

SPOT! Ok going to finish my fic, and then I'll read yours XD

taylorrenee_ily August 11 2010, 17:48:10 UTC

This was amazing♥.

Their friendship was so sweet and Min was such a well-developed character and everything just kind of fit seamlessly together. It was really an amazing fic!

taylorrenee_ily August 11 2010, 17:50:37 UTC

And I totally would've quoted all the awesome things and made this a longer comment, but when I reply to my comments it doesn't show me the fic, so I can't copy-paste from it! :( Idk if it's the layout or if I'm just so technologically stupid that I'm screwing things up without even knowing I am. -_-

taylorrenee_ily August 11 2010, 18:16:43 UTC

OKAY I AM NOT ANONYMOUS.

So that's why it was doing it... the site kept logging me out for some reason. U_U

“I know. But it annoys me. It makes me want to throw a coin at their head to make them notice me.”
Hahah aww Jia♥ it's such a child-like thing to say. She's adorable. :)

Why did she have to be the one to break everything? She had broken her budget, and a few of her dreams along with it, she had broken a lot of people's heart without intending to. Why did she have to be the one to break this relationship, as damaged and miserable as it already was?
I really like how you made Min miserable. Lol I'm a horrible person, but I think it makes the fic a lot more interesting. And I like the logic here, too (as twisted as it is). It's definitely understandable in a non-obvious way. :)

The music was loud. The air was thick and smelled of sweat, alcohol and vomit.
EEEEEEW. :( This makes me never want to go to a bar. :(

And I'd quote the ending, but then I'd quote the whole ending. XD

misschatelle August 12 2010, 02:14:45 UTC

OMG A THREE-PART COMMENT!
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! ♥ ♥

I'm glad to hear it didn't look disjointed or illogical or something!

Oh, and the two times I went in a bar, it didn't smell so bad. There was A LOT of people (A WHOLE LOT OF PEOPLE ACTUALLY), but it wasn't THAT bad.
We can imagine that the bar they chose in the fic wasn't very "clean".

Thank you so much!!!!!!! ^^

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