The end... Part four

[miss_shine]

If your reading this and you like it or don't PLEASE leave some comments, I've written half of the story and I'm trying to decide if its worth finishing. If you want to check out one thru three the links are below, PLEASE leave comments on those as well... Thanks a lot :) I find all of your comments really helpful

Comments

[m_j_]

The story is very interesting so far, but one little nitpick? I'm one of those people who cringes at a very wrong word, and you've accidentally been using the word "draw" (sketch a picture) instead of "drawer" (the things desks, morgues, and furniture have that you put things in) pretty freely. Fix that and I'll enjoy this even more. Thanks!

[miss_shine]

Hey thanks for pointing that one out, someone else noticed it as well, they actually pointed another one out as well. I do have a beta but she slows me down... alot as she works on cruises and doesn't get a lot of time to check my stories before I get bored of waiting and post them anyway, honestly!! I do give her weeks, I'm not annoying impatience or anything... unfortnately its my Dylexia, but lucky my spelling checker gets most of them out or it would be like a mine field!!!

[tayla36]

oh, this is great.

except for the cliffhanger endings. Oi!

[miss_shine]

Ahhh, cliffhangers are my speciality! Thanks for the comment glad you liked it :)

[crazytook]

you might want to proof read this for errors, there are a few typos in this story. (not to worry, i make such errors myself all the time.) it's just little mistakes like this. "Owen managed to get us through that… sort off and I’m sure he get us through this’" it should be "sort of" not "sort off

[miss_shine]

Thanks for the comment, as I think I've said before my beta is a bit crap and I have dyslexia so... you know. Thanks for the comment helpful as ever