Return of the DVD Commentary meme!

[misachan]

Been a while, so let's dust off my favorite meme!

Pick any passage of 500 words or less from any story I've written, and comment to this post with that selection. I will then give you the equivalent of a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the character's heads

Comments

[grasshopr_molly]

"It seems I'm surrounded by curious things." He crossed his arms, his head tilted to the side as he watched Clint in the dust. "What are you offering me for this human of yours

YES! This meme again!

[sirenshaper]

Cas leaned forward, his hands folded together. "Dean," he said, his voice very patient, "if we were quarreling --- and I wasn't aware we were quarreling --- but if we were and you received word I had been captured by my enemies, if you heard me in pain, would you leave me to my fate

[balder12]

One day Castiel comes to more quickly than Dean and Alastair expects and he sees them conferring about something toward the back of the room, Alastair's hand on Dean's shoulder like a proud parent. He pretends to still be unconscious as he watches them; he reads lips tolerably well and spots Alastair nod back toward him and catches the words when he realizes