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May 24, 2009 20:15



Division

Being a lieutenant in Starfleet wasn’t much of an accomplishment. Not everyone could do it, but a large enough percentage passed the tests and had the proper attitude that the rank meant next to nothing. “You’re a lieutenant? That’s nice. I know this admiral, and she’s got the nicest legs you ever did see…”

Second Lieutenant Shane ( Read more... )

prompt, oc characters, fanfiction, star trek

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gun_smoke_blue May 25 2009, 16:00:44 UTC
...*snickers*

I should totally be studying instead of lying out on the quad and using my textbook as a hat, but what the hey. Your characters make me laugh, not because of their personalities ( which are amazingly creepy as hell) but because of their interactions with the hapless people around them. Jayren is spunky ensign love, and I think I want to kidnap him. :D

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mirror_fade May 25 2009, 16:57:04 UTC
What, creepy is FUN ^^

Go ahead and kidnap him, I'm sure he won't mind~

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drelfina May 25 2009, 19:04:42 UTC
Jayren probably would WANT to eb kidnapped. Away from Kelly.

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mirror_fade May 25 2009, 19:56:41 UTC
Because Kelly is just that crazy. I almost feel sorry for Jayren.

Almost.

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oparu June 2 2009, 02:15:40 UTC
yes, witty indeed, and very good with the original characters. Someone noticed the big WTF that Kirk is captain now definitely had to be written and you did it fabulously.

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mirror_fade June 2 2009, 02:27:34 UTC
Hehe, thank you. I'm glad I'm not the only one who thought the transition was a bit sudden...

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