where i am from

[mirbie]

This is what I have so far

Comments

[abrazosdefuego]

I think this is a solid piece of writing so far. The content, especially because I know you so well, it both heartwarming and heartbreaking which, as you know, draws in the reader and allows them to feel a connection to the text

[_holly]

I agree with Belinda. Obviously I don't know that objective as well but I think it's very well written and reading it really made me feel for you and drew me in. <3