Comments | miracleshining: FIC: Impasse (Chapter Seventeen)

miracleshining

FIC: Impasse (Chapter Seventeen)

Jun 12, 2008 20:26

Konbanwa, minnasan! I actually wasn't expecting to get my chapter done tonight, but I spun it out much quicker than I had anticipated! =^^= I admit, I'm TOTALLY in love with this chapter because it sets up so much for the next chapter, along with what I hope will be the big fight scene! I hope everyone enjoys, I'm looking forward to the final ( Read more... )

donghae, hanhae, hankyung, super junior, fan fiction, impasse

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Impasse Addict anonymous June 13 2008, 02:46:39 UTC

SPOT!!!

Impasse Addict anonymous June 13 2008, 03:08:28 UTC

OMG!OMG!OMG! i can't even come up with something coherent other than THIS CHAPTER WAS UTTERLY BRILLIANT! holy crap this chapter was just wicked cool! i am totally itching with anticipation for the next chapter. i can't wait! *can't stop fangirling* you are such an awesome writer!

Re: Impasse Addict miracleshining June 15 2008, 02:16:12 UTC

Thank you so much, IA! It means the world to me that you enjoyed the chapter. I'm particularly proud of this one myself, I think it sets the stage very well for the "final conflict" so to speak. I thank you again for your support, I hope that I'll continue to write chapters worth reading!

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miracleshining June 15 2008, 02:17:26 UTC

I feel so bad that I make everyone cry with this fic! =;.;= But thank you so much for your continued support, it means so much to me! I promise that what happens to our sweet Donghae will be revealed soon! (As well as Hannieah and everyone else's fate!)

hunni23 June 13 2008, 02:55:42 UTC

OMG I LOVE THIIIIIISSSS SOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!
UR DOING SUCH A GREAT JOB. U NEED TO WRITE MORE RIGHT NOW!!!!! I WANNA READ MOAR!!!!!!!!!!

KSDKJFHDSFKHSFSKFKJDS IM SERIOUSLY IN LUB WIF THIS FIC!!!!!!!!

<3333~~~~~

miracleshining June 15 2008, 02:18:35 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you've enjoyed this chapter, it's a personal favorite of mine, I admit! There will be another chapter in another few days. It takes me a while to chart out fight scenes, I have to map them out carefully to make them believeable. But more is coming soon!

=^.^=V

dhgal June 13 2008, 02:58:07 UTC

I'm so happy to see u again!!

and oh i never expected zhoumi to be the fighter who died...

hmn..this is getting more and more interesting..:)

Hope you'll come back with the nex part soon..

miracleshining June 15 2008, 02:19:42 UTC

Thank you so much! I appreciate the support you've shown my work, that means so much to me.

Yup, Zhoumi is the fighter who died. It took me a while to finally set up where I was going to lead into that fact, but I'm glad it worked out that way.

Another chapter in a few more days!

kittypoker June 13 2008, 03:01:45 UTC

Ooh... wow... Zhoumi was a cop and the fighter that was killed? That's a surprise! I love Jaejoong though! He seems so, I don't know the right word to use at the moment, but I still love him! I can't wait for the big fight... Hope you update soon!

miracleshining June 15 2008, 02:21:17 UTC

Thank you so much for those kind words and for taking the time to read my work, that means so much to me!

Yup, Zhoumi was an undercover officer and the fighter. It took me a while to figure out how I was going to work that in the storyline.

Jaejoong is cool, isn't he? I ended up reworking his character a number of times, but I had always intended on it being revealed that he was an ex-undercover cop. He just turned out more awesome than originally intended! XD