FIC: "Immortal" (Chapter Eleven)

[miracleshining]

Konbanwa, minnasan, I hope everyone out there in Cyberland is doing well! For those of you who are travelling for the Easter Holiday weekend, please do so safely! I will be only around periodically as my nephews will be coming in to spend the holiday with us! Yay

Comments

[deutscher_engel]

Omg

I

fuck

I planned on leaving a coherent comment on the last chapter and then you go on and post a new one with sexytimes in it and holy fucking hell I don't even know what I'm saying right now. I want to bake you cookies. For the rest of your life. Just. GAH. <3

[miracleshining]

Thank you so much, I truly appreciate all the support you've shown my storyline!

I'm also happy you enjoyed this chapter. It's very enjoyable for me to write inimate scenes, so this was a really great one to do! (I like the use of hesitancy and realism.)

YAY, COOKIES!

I hope that my next update will be a good read!

[renichifreak]

/gets mop to wipe me up due to being a puddle on the floor

[miracleshining]

Thank you so much, Ladybird!

::gets bucket to pour said melted Ladybird into and then proceeds to keep it under bed for safekeeping::

XD

I hope that my next update will be a good read!

[minkey92]

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flailing and flipping everything in sight.
I can't even.... no words to describe what i am feeling.
Just... Amazing and beautiful and hot and sweet... so many words
*___*

[miracleshining]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. I treasure the opportunity of getting to write intimate scenes, it's one of my favorite things to do!

I do hope that my future updates will be good ones!

[tuni_chan]

This is perfect~ I love the tenderness between the two. I wonder if they get caught~

[miracleshining]

Thank you so much, I'm so happy you enjoyed the update! I really enjoyed writing this chapter.

Ah, do they get caught? More about the "after-effects" of this chapter will be revealed later!

I hope that my future update will be a good one!

[heatherxwho]

Wow. How daring. On set. Mmhmm. Kinky.
It was beautiful though. The uncertainty
and fear they had released once they were
willing to let go.

Thanks. ^^

[miracleshining]

Thank you so much, I'm so appreciative of the support you've shown my work!

And I do have a weak point for public sex, it's just so risky. Even riskier considering where they did it, ne?

I hope that my future updates will be good reads!

[heatherxwho]

With you, I have no doubts that all your future updates will be good reads. ^^