FIC: "Immortal" (Chapter Eleven)

[miracleshining]

Konbanwa, minnasan, I hope everyone out there in Cyberland is doing well! For those of you who are travelling for the Easter Holiday weekend, please do so safely! I will be only around periodically as my nephews will be coming in to spend the holiday with us! Yay

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[miracleshining]

Thank you so much, Jenny! I will always accept an EPIC keysmash as being the ultimate compliment to my work! =^^= It was a real pleasure for me to get to write this scene, I've been waiting ten previous chapters to do it! XD

I hope that my next update will be a good one!

[undying_desire]

That was beautiful. There is no other way to describe it. . . okay perfect comes to mind too. I had Sex on Fire on repeat the whole way through. Way to set the mood.

Jiyong finally let go and it was everything I hoped it would be. You are amazing Miry. *lol* The sex was perfect, it had a sense of caution at the beginning but quickly moved to simply Seunghyun and Jiyong wanting to share this with each other. And with them finding each other and not being scared of what could be lingering in the future. . . that was so sweet.

I've got a huge grin on my face right now. You made my night with this. ^^

[miracleshining]

Thank you so much, my dear friend. I am so grateful for the support you've shown my work. I'm also glad you had "Sex on Fire" playing during this, it heavily impacted the level o f this scene.

I wanted there to be a feeling of caution and uncertainty on both sides in the beginning. Not only are they confronting their physical desires but they're also realizing their emotional ties. The fact that they coupled in such a public place says alot about losing their fears. However, it was a very risky maneuver.

There will of course be the "after-effects" of their intimacy that they will now have to face. Including needing to actually talk about what they want now with each other.

I hope that my future updates will be a good read! (I'm still recovering from my back injury and this has been the most I've been able to sit at the computer all day! =^^=;;)

[volatileflame]

my spot

[volatileflame]

omg~ this was just so beautiful and sensual and hot! ♥

[miracleshining]

::huggles:: Thank you so much, Imoutochan! All your support means the world to me!

I hope that my future updates will be good reads!

[xchubbycheeks]

Is it bad that as I was reading that incredibly hot yet tender bout of sex that I was thinking about someone walking in on them? I was so paranoid lol. But at the same time I was like, Miracle wouldn't ruin that wonderful moment for us...would she? Lol. Wonderful chapter. It was SO worth the wait. Gah. I'm so glad they're together now. Or at least that Jiyong isn't afraid anymore. Looking forward to their future relationship. Oh. *fans self* That was just...mm. *drools* Hahaha. Love!<3

[miracleshining]

Thank you so much, my dear, I'm so glad you enjoyed the newest chapter!

And no, you're definitely not bad thinking that someone might walk in on them. I like how you asked yourself that question if I would do that to them or not. I sat there and did an "Austin Power's Doctor Evil" expression and commented out loud, "Or Would I?" ::laughs::

The GTop are together now but it's definitely not going to smooth sailing. They've still got a lot to talk about and this moment really was a "heat of the moment" thing. But it was also very meant to be!

I hope that my future updates will be a good read! (Still recovering from my back injury, but I am doing much better!)

[xchubbycheeks]

HAHAHA the Doctor Evil expression.

Oh nos. You seem to be sick/injured a lot. Here's me sending you healing/healthy thoughts. *waves fingers*

[raisetheroofnow]

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OMG I'M SO HAPPY AND IDK
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OKAY.
I dunno what to say. I just love you for writing this.
Never stop writing, you're just too good.

And thank you for this chapter, I was waiting for it and it's better than I expected.

will be waiting for moar ♥

[miracleshining]

Thank you so much for reading my work, it means the world to me! I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter, I really do like writing intimate scenes.

I hope that my future updates will be good reads!