FIC: "Immortal" (Chapter Nine)

[miracleshining]

Konbanwa, minnasan, I hope that everyone in Cyberland is doing well. I went back to work for the first time after vacation today. Of course it was uber busy and I now remember how much my legs hurt from standing for long periods of time

Comments

[dyealer]

this is very nice..IDK..I am very emotional right now..SeungHyun please Please PLEASE save JiYong!!and JiYong had totally ruined the moments he could have wth SeungHyun..the moments of love and hurt SeungHyun in the process ):

[miracleshining]

Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed the newest update! =^^= It was a very emotional scene to write and getting the lyrics "just right" was very important.

I hope that my next chapter will be a good read! (Currently finished and in final beta. Should be available this evening!)

[undying_desire]

I can't even formulate a thought right now. . . I'll start thinking once I remember to calm my heart and breathe. . .

[undying_desire]

Okay. *Breathing now* God Seunghyun must think Jiyong punched him because of the kiss! That just has to break him to pieces. But no, Ji feels betrayed that Seunghyun can so calmly go off with Joon. But it's just acting baby. *Hugs*

Oh man and the lyrics! They lyrics. . . oh they were so beautiful. It really made me feel all the more for Seunghyun. With both of them needing saving I don't know who can do what. Save each other. *Tears* "And when the world tells us it's wrong,/ But we know it's right inside," I was in tears. It's up to Jiyong to let go of his fears now and just feel what's right.

I'm kind of scared to see the next chapter. I don't have a clue what to expect. So much could happen. But I still want it to come! (Also, random but props for Sex On Fire!)

[miracleshining]

Thank you so much for those kind words, my friend! I'm so grateful for the support you've shown this piece of work.

Seunghyun is amazing for the "self blame" he puts on himself for everything that Jiyong does. Though I do believe that Ji's jealousy is very palable. This is very new territory for him and it's beyond frightening to a man who thrives on predictability.

I hope that my next chapter will be a good read! (Currently finished and in final beta, should be available this evening!)

And random, but "Sex on Fire" inspired not the following chapter but the one after that heavily. (You'll get what I mean when you read the ending of chapter ten. =~.^=)

[miracleshining]

Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed the newest update!

There was a lot of emotion in this chapter and it made my heart hurt to write it. I wanted the lyrics to really "feel" when I created them. I'm glad that it was able to come across that way. (Though I feel so bad that I'm making everyone cry with this fic! =;.;=)

I hope that my next chapter will be a good read! (It would be kind of awesome if this was a real thing, wouldn't it? Especially after GD admitted that he would have fallen for T.O.P. if he had been a girl.)

[pollaroids]

Sorry I haven't commented in a while, but I have read all of them ^^;
It's haru_haru_21 by the way, I opened another acount :)
Back to the story, this was just breathtaking, I loved it!
I also like your song that your wrote, have you ever thought about being a lyricst? ;)

Thank you for the great update =^^=

[miracleshining]

Welcome back, Rin! I was wondering where you had disappeared too! =^^=

Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed the newest chapter. There was a lot of pain and heartbreak in this one but there is more to come!

Yiss, I did write the lyrics. I wish I was better at writing the melody down and maybe I would have actually made it a real song. =^^=;;

I hope that my next update will be a good one!

[minkey92]

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I can't even... I was so happy when they went to his trailer to talk... and then Ji had to go and do that... UGH ;__;
The lyrics. A.MAZ.ING! Beautiful. I can relate to them so that just made me more emotional.To me this sounds like something Seunghyun would feel.
Hyunnie please save Ji.
Amazing chapter as always
<333

[miracleshining]

Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed the newest chapter!

Just when it seems that Jiyong and Seunghyun have it together, they end up falling apart again, don't they? Two people who want nothing more to see eye to eye and just keep missing.

Thank you for the kind words on my lyrics! I wanted them to feel like something our pained Seungie would feel.

I hope that my next update will be a good read! (Currently finished and in final beta. Should be available later tonight!)