FIC: "Immortal" (Chapter Nine)

[miracleshining]

Konbanwa, minnasan, I hope that everyone in Cyberland is doing well. I went back to work for the first time after vacation today. Of course it was uber busy and I now remember how much my legs hurt from standing for long periods of time

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[volatileflame]

my spot

[volatileflame]

oh.em.geeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
love it all, and the lyrics are amazing! ♥

[miracleshining]

Thank you so much, Imoutochan! I'm always so happy to see your comment!

The lyrics meant a lot to me to write, so I'm so happy they came out with meaning!

Hopefully my next update will be a good read! (Currently finished and in final beta. Should be up to read tonight!)

[renichifreak]

me...Dae!Face...JiYong...PUNCH...-___-

love this, and the song was amazing, Miry~~~ I knew you could do it~~~/cheers

MORE PLEASE~!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[miracleshining]

Thank you so much, Ladybird! Since you know the spoilers, I figured you would still want to punch Ji with Daesung helping! (Or in least we could watch you punch Ji. XD)

I'm so glad the lyrics turned out! I spent more time working on them than writing the chapter! =^^=;;

I hope that my next update will be a good read. (Currently finished and in final beta. Should be up later tonight!)

[renichifreak]

I don;t think I will ever NOT want to punch him, bb...hehehehe

ps-I'm dying my hair today, so we have to skype sometime soon~~~

[miracleshining]

Thank you so much, my dear friend. This was a very emotional chapter for me write. The lyrics were especially important as I tried to picture what kind of pain Seungie felt when he was writing them.

Jiyong is in a different world and it troubles him because he wants things to be okay but they're not. I too love the fact that Seunghyun can stand strong even when he's breaking apart.

I hope that my next chapter will be a good read! (Currently finished and in final beta. Should be up later tonight!)

[arsinen]

Oh wow... I'm serious I held my breath right up until the end. And then the tears came. God this was so intense the emotions... I could literally feel the emotions.

Oh god... Jiyong baby you're hurting yoursef so much and in doing so you're hurting the man you love. Jiyong I hope you realize that you can no longer run. It's time, a decision needs to be made.

On a side note when I read this line "He was going crazy." I noticed that Se7en's 'I'm going crazy' was playing on itunes. I went to search the translation and I found them kind of ironic to the events in your story

[miracleshining]

Thank you so much, my dear! I'm so glad you enjoyed the newest update! (Though I feel bad that I'm making everyone cry with this piece! =;.;=)

Jiyong is so scared of the unknown so he keeps pushing away his feelings and Seunghyun. It's a world that he's never willed himself to explore because it's outside of his comfort zone. I think it's very fitting that Se7en's song "I'm Going Crazy" was playing then. In an aspect, I think it traps what Ji really was feeling.

Seungie is by far too good of an actor. In a way, he's unintentionally damaged their relationship because of the calm face he can put on. But he also wants nothing more than to be strong and prove that he can stand on his own two feet. I applaud him for that.

I hope that my next update will be a good read! (Currently finished and in final beta. Should be up later tonight!)

[heatherxwho]

Ji is killin' me for real. Stop denying your
hyung...or else I'll run off with him. Haha. J/K.
I can't believe he punched him too. Oh man.

Thanks for the update.

[miracleshining]

Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed the newest update!

Jiyong is really having issues and Seunghyun is almost too accepting of his fate. It's amazing how they're just not seeing eye to eye on something that should be so easy to see, ne?

I hope that my next chapter will be a good read!