Drabble: In the Maze

Oct 01, 2007 23:49

Title: In the Maze
Characters: Viktor Krum
Word Count: 100
Rating: Any age
Challenge: All three "I" prompts
Team: Badgers, baby!
A/N: Oh why not. I should have been sleeping two hours ago, and yet, here I am. A certain minor character's first name is borrowed from the fanon of the ever-lovely westwardlee.

I want that extra point, Andrea )

76:i, onehundredmoons

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andrea__88 October 2 2007, 04:02:10 UTC
Excellent use of all the prompts!

Poor Viktor what a horrible experience in that maze but I guess his night was better then Cedric's the poor dear
and I for one am glad you got the inferius in there, I was upset that JKR didn't utilize them more, such great potential...

:o)

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onehundredmoons October 2 2007, 12:07:26 UTC
I had a lot more description of the Inferius initially, but you know, 100 words and all. Thanks for the prompts!

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alphatauri3791 October 2 2007, 10:08:50 UTC
Oh, this is really very nice. :) Poor Viktor.

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onehundredmoons October 2 2007, 12:07:47 UTC
Thank you! Perhaps Hermione will cheer him up? ;)

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alphatauri3791 October 2 2007, 13:17:04 UTC
Please?

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westwardlee October 2 2007, 10:37:09 UTC
*cheers, waving Bulgarian-flag-colored pompoms for Bisera*
Now, seriously. Great, great drabble. I love the way you make the sensation of Imperius a happy, drug-like one, something he won't even want to fight off, rather than a tortured thought. So much easier for the victim to act if he's loving the idea of what he's doing, isn't it?

I hope I made sense - still half asleep here.

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onehundredmoons October 2 2007, 12:09:57 UTC
Thanks! When I saw the list of a whopping three surnames beginning with "I", I thought immediately of your Bisera. I'd have made the whole thing about her, but I wanted the other prompts, too.

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laundrylove October 3 2007, 00:08:02 UTC
Ooh, really great take on the prompts- I love how seamlessly they were all woven togther :)

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onehundredmoons October 3 2007, 03:02:49 UTC
Thanks! I love a challenge. :)

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