SPN Fic: Over Time

[minkmix]

Another oustide POV... all others are listed over here!

-Mink

Title: Over Time
Author: Mink
Rating: PG - Gen - Outside POV
Spoilers: None
Disclaimers: SPN & characters are owned by their various creators.
Summary: Outside POV - A man staying late for work becomes wary of the suspiciously efficient janitorial staff.

Comments

[bratfarrar]

Oh, cool. I love these outside views of the boys - and how competent they are at cleaning. ^_^

If anything had gone on. Staying his hand on the corrugated metal, he wasn’t quite sure if anything actually had.

Very cool. The boys are almost like ghosts themselves, aren't they?

[zionsstarfish]

Oh wow... I loved this!

[zionsstarfish]

♥ :)

[tsuki_no_bara]

i love how conspicuous the boys are while they're trying to sneak around - because how many young, healthy, white american boys are going to work as janitors in little nothing offices - and how well they take care of the plants (or how well dean takes care of the plants :D ) and that the temp thinks they're ex-cons, and that they become riley one and riley two, like thing one and thing two. hee. and i love how they sneak in, dig up a body to salt and burn, and sneak right back out. and i really love "what was he going to say? he found a hole?" because you know the boys leave a lot of people wondering what they've just seen and how would they explain it?

[jasmasson]

So much I love in this, we'll be here all day if I tell you it all, but particularly:

What was he going to say? He found a hole?

And I love Sammy and his non-misdemeanour face (you can bet he's the one driving the excellent cleaning ;-)

But mostly I love that Jeff so reflects how I'd feel if I met Dean - so aware of how really not cool I am and a bit embarrassed about it in the face of Dean, and so wanting to be cool enough to make Dean like me. Ah, Jeff, Dean liked you! You are cool, see ;-)

[tabaqui]

Hehe. I like the weird, lonely, insulated life this guy leads, and his curiosity about secrets and his Bryan Adams cd.
Heh.