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The Hard Goodbye - Chapter Five - And the Clock Starts Ticking...

May 30, 2009 00:13

Title: The Hard Goodbye (5/??)
Author: Minka
Rating: Hard R
Warnings: You should all know the drill by now… AU; set in the mid 80’s in a slightly bastardized Kabukichō district. Very graphic violence, strong course language, character death, drug use and prostitution references, adult themes and sex scenes… oh, and Ruki is a badass!
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- aoi/ruki, ! fanfic, * the hard goodbye

Comments 17

disappear4you May 29 2009, 15:16:26 UTC

*feeds you*

That was a great chapter (as all your chapters are)
I like that Hazuki curses in french, It gives him a little something extra.
Yay Bob! or...boo Bob... I'm still not sure yet

Can't wait for the next!

harlequinn_coy May 29 2009, 16:25:42 UTC

I has watches, my god that was CUTE. I did not see that coming, haha.
Loved Bob the wifebeater too, I hope he randomly pops up later trying to sell watches to Ruki or something.

minka_g June 9 2009, 12:57:21 UTC

My Hazuki muse resents being referred to as 'CUTE'. He finds it degrading and demeaning...

I, however, completely agree with you. Bob was kinda cool, wasn't he.

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minka_g June 9 2009, 12:58:06 UTC

Hazuki rocks. What story could ever be complete without Hazuki?!

Glad you liked it.

ryuushinikaru May 29 2009, 18:15:34 UTC

Well shit... Okay, okay you were right, Hazuki is the awesome and I've admitted it. Now if you tell anyone, I'll have to hurt you. And steal your muses away to torture them.

Let's see. I have goldfish for Aoi, a room full of Aoi posters for Ruki, and a tiny room with no cigarettes for Hazuki. Wataru gets cookies cause I love him so. *grins*

minka_g June 9 2009, 13:11:48 UTC

Hazuki IS the awesome and he only gets better! Then, of course, you will get to meet little Yu and it just keeps getting with the awesome.

Ruki approves of the Aoi posters and requests that it be far away from the goldfish room as Aoi's screaming will ruin the pretty illusions... Hazuki does not approve of no cigarettes but Wataru is happy with the cookies. Minka wants coffee...

orkrist May 29 2009, 21:21:08 UTC

hoky shit that was awesome vhaptr again. you need to forgive me but i'm so fucking durnvk i mean drunk that i can't write anything ithout typos. i read this before i wenthg to my friendsd graduation party but had no time and since i'm wastefd it semmed good idea to comment now...

... i think aiäs'l FUCK IT i'll just come backt laterrr to say what i really think and after i've raead this again. SOBER. cheer'ss hon!

and i'm so fuckicng sorry for harasshing your comnnet box wirth this drunken shnit i ean MENA MEAN ahit FUCKWIT SHIT.

........................... oka y i'll got o pass out now. it's better for veth NO I WANTED TO WRITE everyone.

orkrist May 29 2009, 21:21:50 UTC

and fuck my fingers smwell lije cigarettes AGAIAN.

why the fuyck did i write tis fucking comment.

orkrist June 1 2009, 18:48:30 UTC

okay, you don't even know how damn embarrassed i am right now about my previous comments up there... i considered deleting them, but after all they are pretty hilarious so let them be. or at least that's what they are to me, so feel free to blast them to the bit space if you want to - i really don't know what kind of genious idea was to come and comment when i'm so drunk that i can't see forward ( ... )

minka_g June 9 2009, 14:05:11 UTC

OMG. So like, you officially win the prize for best drunken comments ever. Not to mention that the icon seemed to say more than the words themselves! Don't ask me to understand what you said in the first two, but I shall always look at them fondly and go 'hehe, yeah ( ... )