The Hard Goodbye - Chapter Five - And the Clock Starts Ticking...

[minka_g]

Title: The Hard Goodbye (5/??)
Author: Minka
Rating: Hard R
Warnings: You should all know the drill by now… AU; set in the mid 80’s in a slightly bastardized Kabukichō district. Very graphic violence, strong course language, character death, drug use and prostitution references, adult themes and sex scenes… oh, and Ruki is a badass!
Band: The

Comments

[watkins269]

very good as always.
i was wondering if Hazuki will come into contact with the other characters. I really appreciate him being added to the mix, it makes the story a lot richer and I LOVE his personality.
thank you for taking time to write for us! we really appreciate it.

[minka_g]

Yay for Hazuki. I am glad that everyone seems to have taken so well to him cause he becomes a major part of this story. And yes, it is nice having some outside depth.

Thank you for your comment hon, and glad you are enjoying it.

[hereticpop]

oh yay, Bob the wife beater

[minka_g]

Bob was sooo the shining character in this chapter. I mean, everyone else was just boring compared to him, so I understand the yayness!

Hazuki is such a cocky bastard, just as you put it, but somehow that adds to his charm. The fact that he knows he is good is one hell of a turn on. The cigarette thing is funny, though the Hazuki muse is not impressed as he didn't really get to finish any of them before they disappeared.

As for why he is getting money... hmmm... you'll have to wait and see.

Hazuki did sadly outshine Wataru, didn't he? Then again, I guess you should get used to it as now that Hazuki is in the story, he is here to stay and oddly enough, plays more of a vital role in it all then most of the others...

As usual, thank you so much for your comments. They mean the world to me and the muses;)

[pooobaihr]

So Bob jipped him, eh? so sad.. xD
Wataru and the gross coffee.. xDDDD WHY DID YOU DRINK IT MAN!!?? WHY!

>.> I would have pretended I came down with something because of the coffee and gotten out of the office QUICK!

Preview: HAHAH.. Ruki and his inability to answer questions directly xD

[n3uromanc3r]

Yesterday finally read this chapter too, so I forced myself to write a comment! It's shame but I'm really lazy lately >__So here is the fourth narrator-character. I wonder how his life connect to the other characters. I must to say despite I like lynch. I don't know the members at all... (and I'm in the same situation with girugämesh too), so when Hazuki first appeared I didn't know who could be he, I thought of the Jrockers with ‘H’ but I could remember only Hizumi's and Hizaki's name, then suddenly realized it couldn't be other but the guy you earlier mentioned and now decorating your layout : D

[honeyflavor]

sdlksdgkjs lj ate my comment.

*curses*

Just know that I love it <3