Fic: A Day Off

Dec 02, 2010 10:24

Title: A Day Off
Author: roadkill2580
Rating: PG13
Characters: Lucius Malfoy, Bellatrix Lestrange, Evan Rosier, Voldemort
Prompt(s): The Death Eaters go about asking for the day off.
Warnings: mentions of torture
Summary: Evan is too scared to ask for Christmas off himself.
Word Count: 832
Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter.
A/N: None.

A Day Off )

rating: pg-13, character: voldemort, 2010, character: evan rosier, -fic, character: bellatrix lestrange, character: lucius malfoy

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keppiehed December 2 2010, 01:01:43 UTC
An interesting take on the prompt! I like how you made it wistful, but you still kept Lucius in character, showing how he passed the buck to Rosier instead of standing up to Voldemort himself. A good glimpse into the heart of family in the Death Eater circles!

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roadkill2580 January 3 2011, 23:12:06 UTC
Whoo! Now I can reply to all of my lovely comments! I had hoped I'd managed to keep Lucius IC, and am glad to hear that I did. I really can't see Lucius taking the blame himself if he can blame it on someone else, and who else is more convenient than a younger, less elite Death Eater? Thanks for commenting!!

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torino10154 December 2 2010, 01:56:58 UTC
Lucius is very clever shifting the blame over to Evan. Everyone seems very IC although I laugh a little at the idea of asking Voldie for the day off. *g* Nice job!

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roadkill2580 January 3 2011, 23:13:06 UTC
You know, I laughed at the idea as well, but then I knew I had to do it. Unfortunately, I'm not humorous enough to pull off what I'd had in mind, and so I ended up with what you read. Thanks for commenting!

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kantayra December 2 2010, 02:34:26 UTC
Heehee, Bellatrix sure understands the Christmas spirit, doesn't she? :P This was fun and very in-character at the same time. Thanks for the read!

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roadkill2580 January 3 2011, 23:17:30 UTC
Yes, Bellatrix does have her priorities in order, lol. Thank you for commenting!

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dexstarr December 2 2010, 06:19:23 UTC
Aww! I liked how it was funny and wistful at the same time. Lucius wanting to get home to Draco to have some firsts with his son was sweet, and I liked how you slipped in Narcissa's anger at him always being out with Voldemort, and how Bella invited herself over.

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roadkill2580 January 3 2011, 23:19:53 UTC
You know, I didn't even see the wistfulness until after I had posted it and everyone started commenting. Then I kind of scratched my head and said "huh, they are right, aren't they?" lol. I'm glad someone picked up on Narcissa being more than just irritated with Lucius. Somehow, I've always got the feeling that if she wanted to, she could make things very difficult for Lucius, and that they were equals in their relationship. Thanks for commenting!!

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enchanted_jae December 2 2010, 06:27:46 UTC
It's easy to imagine Bellatrix was a crazy!cakes even before she spent years in Azkaban.

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roadkill2580 January 3 2011, 23:20:21 UTC
It is, isn't it? I usually don't prefer her being insane before Azkaban, but this time, it really fit. Thanks for commenting!!

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