Take Me For A Walk In The Morning Dew (Prologue)

[minhosflower]

Pairing: OnHo
Rating: PG

Comments

Can't breathe!!!!

[dubusangtae14]

It's the prologue!!!!! I was literally spazzing like a bitch when I opened your journal and saw that there's a new post with a cheesy but really intriguing and cute title. Seriously, it's two in the morning and I'm surprised that my sister didn't throw her pillow at me yet

Re: Can't breathe!!!!

[minhosflower]

the title is looong but it's related. the first person who figures it out before it's revealed gets a cookie~ there are too many hints already.

the two floor jump was purposely written so that you'd think so :P lmao. my trap worked, kekeke

ah, the next part is being edited right now. final touches~~ but it's more trouble to make the entry than it was to write 10k! not long before i update!~ i'll let a few days pass first, html is a bitch and i don't like messing with her too often >_<

Re: Can't breathe!!!!

[dubusangtae14]

Lol was it because you're listening to morning dew by Bonnie Dobson? Or is it because Minho will conceive the baby while he and Onew are walking in the morning dew? Oh well, stupid guesses~^o^ i guess I won't get the cookie then...

Good luck with the Bitchy HTML. I'll blame her if you take longer than a year to post, right? =)))

Re: Can't breathe!!!!

[minhosflower]

lol it won't be a year, i'm thinking every three days? i have a good head start and i got inspiration for my second part so i should hopefully be able to keep it up. but there will obviously be a two week break during my exams. i have to at least pretend i'm studying when i go back home to my mom.

keep the guesses coming. the title is a line from the song so a cookie crumble for you so far, but they're not conceiving it during the early hours of the morning :D they like sleeping far too much.

[sweatnitemare]

I'm anticipating this. Your English is good, your have a flair in writing and I felt something weird down my spine at certain parts that involves onew and minho which only happens when what I reach touches my soul.

I want moaaaarrrrr!!! Hahaha.

Please may this be one hell of an awesome minho!mpreg fic coz the once that I read was le sigh.

Thank u!

[minhosflower]

Thank you for the comment ^_^
I hope the first chapter will be to your liking as well :) Thee will be a lot moarrrrr :P

[seungjiyeon]

There's NOTHING negative to say about your prologue. It's fantastic, well written, and really interesting. I like the way you describe Onew's feelings, how he doesn't care about being late for his blind dates... I'll definitely continue to read!

Thanks for sharing!

[minhosflower]

Thank you for your comment. Poor Onew suffering through dates because of his mother and Minho :P

[stellabella1]

stg this is one of my favourite onho fics! it's written perfectly and i always find myself coming back to re-read ^^