Can't breathe!!!!dubusangtae14May 5 2012, 15:12:30 UTC
It's the prologue!!!!! I was literally spazzing like a bitch when I opened your journal and saw that there's a new post with a cheesy but really intriguing and cute title. Seriously, it's two in the morning and I'm surprised that my sister didn't throw her pillow at me yet!!!
The prologue is really good~ it made me smile at how Onew is this obedient accountant who suffers from the matchmaking schemes of his mother~ just so he could obey his little lover's request to keep their relationship shushed. The jump from the 14th floor to the 16th floor made me laugh cause I thought that 'oh wow he's skipping a floor~' but it's actually the cafeteria!! Lol, I'm weird. Oh and Minho's still a student? Heh, interesting~ It's sad how Minho's parents disapprove of him and Onew though :( they're his parent and they should've been the first people who supports him D: ! I also saw that the snippet came from here~ anyway, thanks a lot for this prologue~!!! I'm excited to read the next parts!!!! The spacing's fine and I hope you can post the first part soon~ no pressure though. Take your time ^3^ again, thanks!!
Re: Can't breathe!!!!minhosflowerMay 5 2012, 15:36:16 UTC
the title is looong but it's related. the first person who figures it out before it's revealed gets a cookie~ there are too many hints already.
the two floor jump was purposely written so that you'd think so :P lmao. my trap worked, kekeke
ah, the next part is being edited right now. final touches~~ but it's more trouble to make the entry than it was to write 10k! not long before i update!~ i'll let a few days pass first, html is a bitch and i don't like messing with her too often >_<
Re: Can't breathe!!!!dubusangtae14May 5 2012, 15:54:26 UTC
Lol was it because you're listening to morning dew by Bonnie Dobson? Or is it because Minho will conceive the baby while he and Onew are walking in the morning dew? Oh well, stupid guesses~^o^ i guess I won't get the cookie then...
Good luck with the Bitchy HTML. I'll blame her if you take longer than a year to post, right? =)))
Re: Can't breathe!!!!minhosflowerMay 5 2012, 16:00:00 UTC
lol it won't be a year, i'm thinking every three days? i have a good head start and i got inspiration for my second part so i should hopefully be able to keep it up. but there will obviously be a two week break during my exams. i have to at least pretend i'm studying when i go back home to my mom.
keep the guesses coming. the title is a line from the song so a cookie crumble for you so far, but they're not conceiving it during the early hours of the morning :D they like sleeping far too much.
Re: Can't breathe!!!!dubusangtae14May 6 2012, 01:14:42 UTC
Every three days is fine~ it keeps th suspense alive! And youre very free to take a break for two weeks when the story's getting really exciting. Leave us high and dry!!! Lol.
Is it because there's a line that he heard a baby crying? Onho's having a baby so yeah, does it have something to do with Minho feeling something weird that's why he's having a feeling that he's having a hunch about being pregant? Lol, sorry!
Re: Can't breathe!!!!minhosflowerMay 6 2012, 06:11:13 UTC
:P okay okay. I just feel bad about having to take a break. I wanna write!! Lol. But I'll be busy catching up with friends and family anyway since I haven't seen them for months. Sweet onho will have to wait. The good thing is the smut, I mean the conception, will be up by then.
Re: Can't breathe!!!!dubusangtae14May 6 2012, 07:43:20 UTC
That two weeks will be solid family and friends (plus "study") time and also a break time for you ;) maybe you'll get more inspiration when you're well rested, right? Hm, I have a feeling the the smut will be up in the next chapter? Lol, so assuming. When you take a break, I'll be fine, re-reading everything that had been posted already. That's what I do most of the time while the updates are not yet up. I don't even know why I'm doing that... =))))
Re: Can't breathe!!!!minhosflowerMay 6 2012, 07:59:53 UTC
Lol. I forgot the "study time". Thanks for reminding, haha! Hope I update fast enough so that you won't have to reread chapters to the point where you'll know them by heart. You guessed it, conception (sounds classier than smut right) in next part. I need to get this story going.
Re: Can't breathe!!!!minhosflowerMay 6 2012, 09:01:31 UTC
I really hope I wrote it well enough for you to need a new set of pants. My beta need to read it for me before I post to tell me if it's hot enough to melt a computer.
Re: Can't breathe!!!!dubusangtae14May 6 2012, 10:01:23 UTC
Based on the way you wrote The Wall, I think that I would definitely need it. =))) Your beta is really lucky, she gets to read it before anyone else could!
Re: Can't breathe!!!!minhosflowerMay 6 2012, 13:20:55 UTC
She agreed to officially beta me but she's a little worried about the 11k. So I wouldn't call her so lucky, lmao. Only way to find out is to ask her I hope the quality is that of the wall. The wall was acctually in my head for weeks and then on my computer for months before I edited it SEVERAL times and posted.
Re: Can't breathe!!!!dubusangtae14May 6 2012, 14:38:30 UTC
Lol, she's one good friend! She agreed to beta you~ 11k?! (all conception?) Ooooh, I'm excited~ it'll keep me busy for at least fifteen minutes!!! You really like editing a lot...I now feel so unprofessional typing my thing down in one go and posting it. Ah, I really need to reflect on my life.
The prologue is really good~ it made me smile at how Onew is this obedient accountant who suffers from the matchmaking schemes of his mother~ just so he could obey his little lover's request to keep their relationship shushed. The jump from the 14th floor to the 16th floor made me laugh cause I thought that 'oh wow he's skipping a floor~' but it's actually the cafeteria!! Lol, I'm weird. Oh and Minho's still a student? Heh, interesting~ It's sad how Minho's parents disapprove of him and Onew though :( they're his parent and they should've been the first people who supports him D: ! I also saw that the snippet came from here~ anyway, thanks a lot for this prologue~!!! I'm excited to read the next parts!!!! The spacing's fine and I hope you can post the first part soon~ no pressure though. Take your time ^3^ again, thanks!!
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the two floor jump was purposely written so that you'd think so :P lmao. my trap worked, kekeke
ah, the next part is being edited right now. final touches~~ but it's more trouble to make the entry than it was to write 10k! not long before i update!~ i'll let a few days pass first, html is a bitch and i don't like messing with her too often >_<
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Good luck with the Bitchy HTML. I'll blame her if you take longer than a year to post, right? =)))
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keep the guesses coming. the title is a line from the song so a cookie crumble for you so far, but they're not conceiving it during the early hours of the morning :D they like sleeping far too much.
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i might have give away too much now...
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Is it because there's a line that he heard a baby crying? Onho's having a baby so yeah, does it have something to do with Minho feeling something weird that's why he's having a feeling that he's having a hunch about being pregant? Lol, sorry!
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And, still no cookie for you :( its okay tho, the story still has a long way to go.
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Hope I update fast enough so that you won't have to reread chapters to the point where you'll know them by heart.
You guessed it, conception (sounds classier than smut right) in next part. I need to get this story going.
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I hope the quality is that of the wall. The wall was acctually in my head for weeks and then on my computer for months before I edited it SEVERAL times and posted.
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