Forgiveness

Nov 17, 2015 17:21

Pairing: Yunjae, Yoosu, Homin, Minsu
Rating: Rated for themes
Warnings: Trigger for abuse and disfunctional relationships
Summary: Jaejoong had a great boyfriend and a fantastic best friend. Then one day it all ended. Now everyone's lives have to go on.
Sequel to Jealous or the Ultimate Betrayal.

Forgiving )

fic: jealous, yoosu, yunjae, homin, minsu

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kattan69 November 18 2015, 00:38:14 UTC
So life goes on....after leaving the two bastards behind in Seoul. At least Jae can be himself and MinSu found they are better off with each other. The End!

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minesomine November 18 2015, 01:31:32 UTC
Minsu stole the sequel. ;)

And Jae is gonna be happy again.

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shinchul303 November 18 2015, 01:21:55 UTC
Just finished both these (Jealous/Forgiveness) and congratulations on a very heavy, riveting account of some fucked up relationships.

Minsu was a surprise! Kind of lifted things out of the muck.

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minesomine November 18 2015, 01:36:00 UTC
Minsu showed up out of left field as I started to write the sequel. Couldn't let them end with Yun and Chun when those two had been so mean to Jae. And Min rescuing Su from Chun and his depression was a nice touch. Some bad boys can become better.
Jae is a survivor. That's the spirit I tried to show.

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shinchul303 November 18 2015, 01:49:01 UTC
A survivor indeed. I know it's stupid to say this, but I honestly think military service is the best thing that could have happened to Kim Jaejoong. It yanked him out of the sycophantic entertainment world, which in my opinion was slowly killing him.

Talk about breath play...

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minesomine November 18 2015, 03:48:55 UTC
He does look healthy. :D
It's good to see him with a proper weight for his height.

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kyouya3 November 18 2015, 17:50:23 UTC
I didn't realise this was up! Anyway, I'm happy Jae isn't w/ Chun or Yun (I can't believe I say that, I'm YunJae shipper but Yun is too much here) and also happy for MinSu XD yeyyy

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minesomine November 18 2015, 20:44:29 UTC
Thank you. Yes, this is one story where Jae is better off alone or with someone else.

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crystaldee November 20 2015, 13:16:10 UTC
Ohhh thank goodness Jae didn't go back to Yun anymore! Yun didn't deserve Jae at all.
Kekekkkekeke.....

I love this story ^__^

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minesomine November 20 2015, 14:56:44 UTC
There's already lots of stories where Jae goes back to Yun no matter what he did.
This Yun did not deserve Jae.
Thanks for agreeing. ;)

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sheerasyj November 23 2015, 10:37:05 UTC
When I saw the title I was like noooooo don't tell me Jae is going back to Yunho...but then I started reading and was oh dear god Yunho so deserved everything happening to him and the cheek of him thinking Jae would want him back...I laughed when Jae threatened to call the cops on Yunho hahahaha....I love that his character became so strong here....and ooh hot football player huh...wish you'd included the part where both Yoochun and Yunho saw Jae being happy with his new squeeze.....and being endlessly tortured by it...hahaha..Oh well
And Minsu sure is a big surprise! Chunnie also deserved to be left in the dust like that...his treatment of Junsu is way too atrocious....Am very happy with this sequel...

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minesomine November 23 2015, 13:04:45 UTC
Trick tittle. On purpose. I'm sure you were not the only one thinking that I'd go the route of happy ending with all is forgiven. Nah. Nope. No way.
Glad to see you were not rooting for that "happy" ending.
Minsu sort of stole the show. ;)

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