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minesomine

Where were you all my life? 30/?

Mar 04, 2014 17:08

Chapter 30 - Interrogation - The Cops Method - part 1

Summary:
Kim Jaejoong is forced to do business with the mafia who keep threatening him. Changmin, Junsu and Yoochun are responsible for his security.
Jung Yunho is a cop investigating a paedophile/mafia man named Kim Jaejoong and the mafia is blackmailing him to do one job for them: kill ( Read more... )

violence, yoosu, minjunki, yunjae, smut, fic: where were you, action

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paoktsou March 4 2014, 19:42:12 UTC

so much action
but i love Yunho telling of Changmin , dunno but i found it so sweer & sexy OTL !!
can't wait for the 2nd part ^o^

thanks for updating

minesomine March 4 2014, 19:50:18 UTC

Probably will post it tomorrow. I finally wrote today the entire interrogation scene + Yunho's plan to get the cops on Siwon. Decided to split it into two parts to give you guys some cliffhangers.

Yunho just lost it, didn't he? That was Yunho doing all the talking, I swear I had nothing to do with that. Man is fierce. Even Min got quiet.

xzeffirx March 4 2014, 20:50:53 UTC

Hope all Jae had llearned before will help him to keep calm after this question.. Well, never trust cops, even if they seem like nice ones.

minesomine March 4 2014, 22:33:05 UTC

They have been probably practising for the interrogation, since they knew Jae would be called sooner or later.
And maybe Yunho gave Jae some ideas too.

One thing is for sure, Jae knew he was going to be questioned about the two boys, just maybe not so directly. Let's hope he keeps calm and answers in a way that the cops will believe him.

noeldenever March 4 2014, 21:36:47 UTC

Ugh, WHY A CLIFFHANGER *shakes you hard

The cops are confused, & they made me confused too...everybody's confused, wonder how you'll untangle all this mess of a case you've created dear Author-ssi ;)

Everyone in this fic has a high temper problem, yeah? o_O Wonder if we'll find Mr.Jung's outburst too one day..who knows LOL. That will be shocking.

I'm craving for some YunJae time but I know I won't get it again for a while, they're too messed up. Yunho's in denial & Jae doesn't even realize that Yunho's attracted to him *sobs

Thank you for the update <3333333

minesomine March 4 2014, 22:46:04 UTC

I almost always do cliff hangers. *smiles shamelessly*
And I even admit I wrote the interrogation scene + Yunho's plan and then split it into two parts to give you guys some cliffhangers. Yes, I did that. Yes, I am mean. And I love being mean. You can call me Mini Minnie or Voldemine. *smirks*

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noeldenever March 5 2014, 03:49:09 UTC

How dare you woman....how could you do this to meeee??????? huhuhuhu... ;;A;;

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minesomine March 5 2014, 07:44:57 UTC

Honey... *walks slowly up to u*

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minesomine March 4 2014, 22:20:55 UTC

*huggles u and jumps on u* MINE!

ext_1727302 March 4 2014, 23:14:03 UTC

I was a minute away from sleeping when I found out that you've updated and of course couldn't sleep before reading it , Idk if this is weird but I'm so happy that Yunho finally yelled and let out everything that was kept inside , I like it when he shows more his feelings about this whole thing and I really hope that jaejoong won't ruin yunho's plan by losing his temper or doing something stupid cuz the last thing they'd want now is getting in more trouble and jang geun suk ...that guy idk why but I'm suspecting that he has something to do with all of this

minesomine March 4 2014, 23:48:02 UTC

Off to sleep, you will have more to read tomorrow.
I don't know from where that Yunho outburst came from. When I looked at the page, there it was, Yunho yelling at Min and Min actually not making things worse. Yunho's real personality is showing more and more.
Jae can't lose his temper in front of the cops, he has no evidence of his innocence regarding the boys. Damn, that would be too stupid and I like to think Jae is smart even with that temper of his.
Jan Geun Suk will probably try to mess things more, he hates Yunho's guts.

ext_1727302 March 5 2014, 10:21:44 UTC

Can't wait for it ! I feel that the more the story is moving forward the more interesting it gets , I just wish yunho will meet up with his friends sometime coz up until now it's been mostly about jaejoong and his entourage , it'd be great to see yunho interacting with his friends again , it must've been a longtime

minesomine March 5 2014, 10:33:21 UTC

Soon he will talk with them and even meet with them.

I am crazy. I have a huge cast and I keep trying to get them all in the same room at the same time. Someone send me to the shrink.
*counts characters in scene above*
11? Damn, I hadn't even realised that. There are 11 people on that interrogation scene. Jae, Jun Ki, Chun, Min, Il Woo, and Soo Hyun in one room. Rain, Min Ho and his new partner, plus the two cops who did the mafia research in the other room.
I just know I am not doing the catering for that many people.

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