Where were you all my life? 30/?

Mar 04, 2014 17:08

Chapter 30 - Interrogation - The Cops Method - part 1

Summary:
Kim Jaejoong is forced to do business with the mafia who keep threatening him. Changmin, Junsu and Yoochun are responsible for his security.
Jung Yunho is a cop investigating a paedophile/mafia man named Kim Jaejoong and the mafia is blackmailing him to do one job for them: kill ( Read more... )

violence, yoosu, minjunki, yunjae, smut, fic: where were you, action

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ext_1727302 March 4 2014, 23:14:03 UTC
I was a minute away from sleeping when I found out that you've updated and of course couldn't sleep before reading it , Idk if this is weird but I'm so happy that Yunho finally yelled and let out everything that was kept inside , I like it when he shows more his feelings about this whole thing and I really hope that jaejoong won't ruin yunho's plan by losing his temper or doing something stupid cuz the last thing they'd want now is getting in more trouble and jang geun suk ...that guy idk why but I'm suspecting that he has something to do with all of this

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minesomine March 4 2014, 23:48:02 UTC
Off to sleep, you will have more to read tomorrow.
I don't know from where that Yunho outburst came from. When I looked at the page, there it was, Yunho yelling at Min and Min actually not making things worse. Yunho's real personality is showing more and more.
Jae can't lose his temper in front of the cops, he has no evidence of his innocence regarding the boys. Damn, that would be too stupid and I like to think Jae is smart even with that temper of his.
Jan Geun Suk will probably try to mess things more, he hates Yunho's guts.

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ext_1727302 March 5 2014, 10:21:44 UTC
Can't wait for it ! I feel that the more the story is moving forward the more interesting it gets , I just wish yunho will meet up with his friends sometime coz up until now it's been mostly about jaejoong and his entourage , it'd be great to see yunho interacting with his friends again , it must've been a longtime

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minesomine March 5 2014, 10:33:21 UTC
Soon he will talk with them and even meet with them.

I am crazy. I have a huge cast and I keep trying to get them all in the same room at the same time. Someone send me to the shrink.
*counts characters in scene above*
11? Damn, I hadn't even realised that. There are 11 people on that interrogation scene. Jae, Jun Ki, Chun, Min, Il Woo, and Soo Hyun in one room. Rain, Min Ho and his new partner, plus the two cops who did the mafia research in the other room.
I just know I am not doing the catering for that many people.

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ext_1727302 March 5 2014, 11:36:08 UTC
Lol , you shouldn't worry about that as long as it's good such things don't matter
Personally , you can put all the characters in one chapter and I wouldn't mind , more characters more chaos lol
And I'm not expert in these stuffs but I think it's completely normal considering that it's an action Story , for action to happen you need more characters involved

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minesomine March 5 2014, 12:21:10 UTC
Honey, I still have more action planned. I mean, the bad guys have all been very quiet. That can't be. They need to show up and, you know, be bad guys. They need to remind us why we should fear them.
Let the chaos begin.

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