The Best Part of Waking Up [NarukoRP]

[minakixass]

Title: The Best Part of Waking Up
Fandom: narukorp
Characters: Sakurai, Sachiko, Kureno, Asuka
Word Count: 625
Rating: PG13
Summary: Asuka needs a little help waking up in the morning, and Sachiko's just the one to do it. Unfortunately.
Author's Notes: Based upon crack discussed between me & zuul. Also, I miss Naruko. ;~;

Comments

[beloved_baka]

It's moments like this that make Yuugao glad he doesn't interact with Sachiko very much. His sleep is interrupted enough with the Paper Dolls that he doesn't need a third woman to give him rude awakenings. (And getting woken by Nejiko is never a bad thing in his mind, so she doesn't count.)

I loved how blase Kureno was about the whole thing and I think it really worked well having Sakurai be the narrator instead of Sachiko. It left the reader in anticipation and while we still don't know exactly what Sachiko did...we can still imagine. And that keeps it fresh and fun. You can re-read it and go "I wonder if she did X or if she did Y" or "Last time I thought she must have done Y, but now that I've re-read it I think it has to be X, actually."

Overall - well done and very fun.

[minakixass]

*grins*

Thank you for the awesome review. I figure that whatever happened with Sachiko & Asuka is best left to the reader's imagination -- that way they're never disappointed. ^^

[wolfieziri]

Okay, I lol'd. This is hideous and I love you.

[minakixass]

*cackles* ilu2~ <3

[rurounigochan]

Ditto to the ziri. XD Awesome, Mina. Simply awesome.

Poor Asuka. I can only imagine. *dies again* And if it's anything LIKE what I can imagine, the next scene involves Asuka stomping out and taking a moment to glare at Kureno and say, "Why do you let her in to DO that?!"

Love. Lots of love. X3

[minakixass]

\o/ ♥!