god says nothing back [spn][one-shot]

[mimblexwimble]

Title: God Says Nothing Back
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: Dean, Sam, Castiel
Word Count: 2600
Rating: PG-13
Summary: In his dreams, he's running.
Notes: Tag to 5x14 My Bloody Valentine. Title from The Wallflowers. Fic contains a lyric from Hey Jude belonging to The Beatles.

Comments

[secretlytodream]

“That is Sam. That’s Sam, who was pushed into doing the one thing he’s been fighting against all fucking year. That’s Sam, who’s fucking scared out of his mind, calling to your father and asking for some fucking help.”
You breaking my heart all over again :'(

I really liked how you wrote this Dean. It seems like we saw everything in the show, but there's so much more left.

It's just...wow. I agree to have this sort of angst in the show only if we have a really happy ending. Like, really.

[mimblexwimble]

I KNOW, RIGHT?! The happiness should kill me - it should be a happy-overload.

Thanks so much for reading, bb! ♥

[secretlytodream]

I KNOW, RIGHT?!
I don't think you do! LOL

it should be a happy-overload.
Amen to that.

[mimblexwimble]

*is the picture of innocence*

[applepie_x0]

“You have peanut butter. Dean likes peanut butter.” ohh Cas <3

:( This is so sad. You write so beautifully hun! <3

[mimblexwimble]

Thank you! ♥

[debbiel66]

Honestly there are no words.

I adored this - I was going to read it quickly because I had other things to do, but a paragraph in, I realized I was going to have to read this later to give it the attention it deserves. Gorgeous and terrible - this hit me like a sucker punch, but in all the best ways. Brilliant use of Dean's shattered POV. And of course, the glimpses we got of Sam were devastating.

Okay, please fill up Oh!Sam with new stories, please, pretty please. *mems because it's crazy good*

[mimblexwimble]

Aw, your comments always make me crazyhappy. ♥

AND YOU. I'M WAITING FOR YOUR FICS TO POP UP AT THE COMM, MISSY! *hugs*

[callistosh65]

God, I have such a lump in my throat right now. That final image of Dean carrying Sam out was too much - in the best possible way. And those dreams.. oh my.. ::sniffles and applauds simultaneously::

[mimblexwimble]

Thank you so much!

[tabaqui]

Every bit of that breaks my heart. Of course, both of them, thinking 'what if i just...?' They can't not. They're so damn tired. And you've got it all there, hanging-by-a-thread desperation and the loathing and the despair and the bewilderment.

God's got a lot to answer for, hell yeah.
*sniffle*

Excellent stuff.

[mimblexwimble]

They are so damn tired. That's just it. I can't even imagine the exhaustion - they can't even die, jeez.

Thank you so much!