god says nothing back [spn][one-shot]

[mimblexwimble]

Title: God Says Nothing Back
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: Dean, Sam, Castiel
Word Count: 2600
Rating: PG-13
Summary: In his dreams, he's running.
Notes: Tag to 5x14 My Bloody Valentine. Title from The Wallflowers. Fic contains a lyric from Hey Jude belonging to The Beatles.

Comments

[embroiderama]

Oh god, this story *hurts* but it's gorgeous at the same time.

Because it would be easier, you know? Easier to do it himself, if someone was leading the way. Dean might not follow Sam everywhere, but he’d follow him - there.

*cries* Kill me why don't you?

[mimblexwimble]

THEY'RE KILLING ME.

Thanks for reading! ♥

[etoile444]

ohhh, so very well written. It would be easier it seems to say yes. It takes amazing strength to say no.

[mimblexwimble]

Right now, that's what it feels like - and why don't they deserve to just have peace, no matter how much they're at fault for what's happening?

Thanks so much for reading!

[ratherastory]

Ow.

Ow. Ow. Ow.

Um... nothing coherent to say. Still waiting for Kripke to fix what he broke.

I don't think it comes as a surprise if I say this was painful to read, right?

[mimblexwimble]

I gave myself a headache writing it, haha.

Kripke's got eight episodes to prove to me he's at least trying to fix them. *taps foot*

Thanks for reading, bb!

[saschi212]

Ohhh ouch ouch ouch! This is all of what Dean's face has said every time Sam's been in the panic room. This is beautiful, but so painful. The imagery of the sun vomiting light is so striking--that the world is so horrible right now that even sunlight seems grotesque. I really, really love this.

[mimblexwimble]

I'm so happy; you got the meaning behind the sun image so perfectly.

Thank you so much for reading!

[isha_chan]

You hit the point.
In the beginning I was so sure none of the two will ever say yes. Right now I could totally understand why they would. Sometimes I wonder why they don't put an end to it and just say yes and - like you so perfectly wrote - finally find some rest.

This is so very well written I feel the same pain in my little heart like I do when I see Dean so desparate...

[mimblexwimble]

Aside from four years of each of their lives, neither of them have ever been able to find anything resembling peace. And how much do they owe anyone, really? I can see them saying yes now too - and not only that, I probably wouldn't be able to blame them for it.

Thank you!