My latest 30_kisses Knives x Vash fic: "Scream For Me"

[millyfan]

Theme: "17. kHz (kilohertz)"

Title: Scream For Me

Fandom: Trigun

Pairing: Knives x Vash primary, Knives x Legato, references to Wolfwood = Vash and Midvalley = Wolfwood

Word count: 1833

Rating: 16 up

Warnings: Knives first-person POV, yaoi lime, graphic violence, references to sex, references to rape, angst, animeverse with manga elements.

xposted to: 30_kisses

Comments

[celesma]

*pointless babble*

Wow. Wow. WOW. I don't even like yaoi, but this was so eloquently written, so very IC for Knives. I understand it's part of a series, but it works so well as a stand-alone. Love it.

XD thank you ^_^

[millyfan]

Thank you, thank you so much *bows*

[forgottenlover]

oh owwwwww so much the hurty goodness >.>

^_^

[millyfan]

Thank you ^_^

Thank you ^_^

[millyfan]

That was the theme I was attempting to go for, to show Knives's mental state. I'm happy you liked it ^_^

(Oh and it's interesting that the bulb Plants have very limited mental capacity. It's an interesting idea that Knives may have seen their mental level as better than that of humans, and chose to be like a spoiled, deluded kid than to grow somewhat, as Vash seems to have done)

Re: Thank you ^_^

[millyfan]

Yeah, that is very easy to see, and could explain his regression and his desire to meld with the Plant gestalt in the manga very well.

[glass_bullet]

Once again, very very lovely work. You capture exactly what I feel when I'm writing Knives' pov. To connect on a level of thought like that is wonderful. ♥

[millyfan]

Thank you ^_^ It's good to get reviews like this, because 1st person POV is the thing I worry about writing the most, whether I'm IC or not, whether I've gone on too long or not or been too brief. . .