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millstone1005

Firebug, Chapter 6/7

Jun 28, 2006 19:31

Firebug 6

Title: Firebug
Characters: Ryan, Sandy, Kirsten, Seth and other season 1 characters
Timeframe: mid season 1
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I own nothing related to The O.C.. Not for profit.
Description: There is a fire at Harbor. Arson. Guess who is the prime suspect?

Author’s Note: Much thanks to my new beta fredsmith518 for all of her ( Read more... )

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Comments 11

60schic June 29 2006, 00:00:36 UTC

Damn fine update, millstone! I am so looking forward to how you are going to end this.

millstone1005 June 29 2006, 01:23:12 UTC

Thank you. I hope it doesn't disappoint.

katwoman76 June 29 2006, 00:43:13 UTC

“I’ve seen the way these cops and lawyers look at me, Sandy. My record, my family...”
Hehe...adding a little canon speech from Ryan. Nice touch.
I really like this. And it's so true.
Great update.

I'm really looking forward to find out how you will finish this story.

millstone1005 June 29 2006, 01:24:20 UTC

Thanks.

Yeah, I always liked that line, and it seemed appropriate here. Glad you liked it.

beachtree June 29 2006, 01:22:55 UTC

I see you've incorporated that very revealing and insightful part of Ryan's thoughts to Sandy after he was wrongfully accused in "The Aftermath." That was one of the few times he's ever verbalized his feelings about being mislabeled because of his past and so many forces beyond his control. It's equally appropriate here ( ... )

millstone1005 June 29 2006, 01:30:04 UTC

Thanks for your comments, as usual.

I see you've incorporated that very revealing and insightful part of Ryan's thoughts to Sandy after he was wrongfully accused in "The Aftermath."

I always liked that quote and couldn't resist using it here.

Trying for just a little entrapment?

Yup, they were trying, but it didn't work.

Great job at heightening the tension and giving us, and Ryan, the opportunity to see Sandy use his professional expertise, passion for justice and feelings for Ryan to protect him.

Thanks. I love writing Sandy like this. I think this was my favorite scene to write in this whole story.

beachtree June 29 2006, 02:05:29 UTC

I've always remembered that quote as well since Ben delivered the line so well that it really hit home, especially combined with the tone of his voice and his body language and expression. Lots of layering going on with so few words.

It was great to read Sandy like this after having him be such a disappointment for so long in canon. This is Sandy at his best when he's most needed. For once, Ryan is getting support despite the best efforts of those amassed against him. I can tell you enjoyed sticking it to them and really digging in with Sandy!

knightdawn June 29 2006, 05:04:38 UTC

AWESOME!!!! I can't wait to see what HAPPENS next!!!! AWESOME!!!!

millstone1005 June 29 2006, 05:06:50 UTC

Thanks

fredsmith518 June 29 2006, 11:30:57 UTC

I really like this chapter. There were so many ways it could have gone, but I like the understated.

millstone1005 June 29 2006, 17:50:26 UTC

Thanks, Fred.