Better Next Year (4/4)

Jan 01, 2007 21:36

2006
Title: Better Next Year
Fandom: The O.C.
Characters:, Ryan, Cohens+1
Spoilers: up through 4.7 The Chrismukk-huh?
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I own nothing related to The O.C.. No profit taken.
Description: Four scenes with Ryan, one for each of the four Chrismukkahs he has spent with the Cohens.
Beta: fredsmith518

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fredsmith518 January 2 2007, 10:24:08 UTC
I like the way you had Ryan watch Sandy and Kirsten from the bathroom door - that picture works, cute indeed and I liked the crack about them thinking of him as 8 also. So him that he liked the idea of them working together rather than homing in on their care for him.

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millstone1005 January 2 2007, 18:17:51 UTC
Thanks, Fred. I'm glad you like it, since I added that paragraph based on your suggestion :-) (I hope you don't mind I used your list of chores).

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fredsmith518 January 2 2007, 18:51:19 UTC
I suggested you add more, but you ran with it and changed it beyond my suggestion, and I was quite pleased with the list of chores, having initially thought, 'Okay, I can't just say more, gotta be a bit more helpful than that!' so glad they worked for you too.

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smc36 January 2 2007, 15:47:46 UTC
Very nice -- but totally sad that this is probably the last Chrismukkah.
Stupid Fox Exec Monkeys.

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millstone1005 January 2 2007, 18:18:12 UTC
Thanks.

Yeah, true.

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helen_c January 2 2007, 20:13:10 UTC
Very nice. It's true that Ryan has a horrible track record with holidays, poor kid... :) I loved the part where he watched Sandy and Kirsten.

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millstone1005 January 2 2007, 20:27:08 UTC
Thanks, Helen.

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