You & Me - The Second Act - chapter 9

[kugelfischli]

As promised, you'll get to know some more about the show they are performing

Comments

[turquoise_khris]

oh ... *speechless*

that was so good.

[kugelfischli]

i was pretty unsure if i could write it like that, when i was working on it.. but, if you think it's good, then everything's fine *laughs*

[just_keep_on]

What a wonderful post to wake up to!

Well not Osa hurting Asa, but with another chapter of this story ^^;; I'm glad Osa was able to focus. Asako's "Be gentle with me, will you?" was cute~

Btw, I kept picturing Death!Osa and Elisabeth!Asa for that one scene in the play ^_^

[shetan83]

For some reason, I read it too quickly at first and thought that Osa was a vampire biting Asako's neck. @_@

And lol, Asako's "be gentle with me". XD~

[just_keep_on]

Now I'm picturing Asako saying "Be gentle" before Vampire!Osa bites her. O_o

.. Okay, now someone's gotta write a Takarazuka vampire fic.

[kugelfischli]

ahahah, vampire.. uhm, just wait

well.. i kind of killed my own mind with this "be gentle" *laughs*

[just_keep_on]

*LOL!* It was a very good line!

... wait! Your mind can't be killed! We need the next chapter~~

(is now a rabid fangirl :P)

[onion_mob]

Amazing! Such strong imagery and all perfectly believable. I was so excited I was on the edge of my chair futon. XD

[kugelfischli]

well, good to know you won't break you neck when falling of a futon, so i can keep on *smiles*

[scoutnabout]

It was nice to see them act a bit. Nice touch with the tear being felt too.