[FIC] I'm Waiting for That Setting Sun to Burn Me, Thor/Loki

[milky_haven]

I’m Waiting for That Setting Sun to Burn Me

Thor/Loki

Beta-ed by the ever lovely silverlynxcat.
Other mistakes are mine.

Comments

[serluvia]

You...you posted this fic earlier for me?....Gosh, you made me feel special my dear friend. Look, I'm crying happy tears because of you (˘̩̩̩⌣˘̩̩̩ƪ)
An amnesic! Loki fic huh? There are many of this, but yours is special. You know why? Cause yours is finished and I love it!!
My favorite part is when Loki asked Thor (Veur) if he had a family and Thor's answer "I hate him", ohhh it made my eyes glassy! This means that Thor KNEW that he is one of the reason for Loki's madness and he felt extremely guilty for being insensitive and abandoning Loki before.
About the ending, can I say that Loki finally regained his memory through an "illuminating" sex? HA!!

Thank you so much for posting it earlier, I truly appreciate it! *gives you a bear hug*

[milky_haven]

can I say that Loki finally regained his memory through an "illuminating" sex?

ROFL BEST COMMENT EVER!

I like to hear how others perceive the ending. It could be anything. Like it's up to the reader to figure out whether Loki just remember Thor, or everything, or just his 'brother' but still not knowing who is Veur.

I know there's like a lot of amnesia!Loki fic and I had join the troop and wrote one. I can't help it!!!

And you got it right that Thor hates himself! Because he's being an asshole, this happened to Loki. So Thor creates a different identity for himself - Veur who is caring and kind and understanding.

[serluvia]

Oh, so there's a possibility that Loki only remembered the name, but not everything? Oh well, I love the angs between them. Makes me want to watch Avengers more.
Milky I'm so giddyyyyy right now!! My friends is watching the movie right now while I'm stuck here at home! In front of my laptop!! I begged my mother to go to the cinemas, but what did she say?!

"No, wait till Sunday. Tonight? No, it's already too late now. Tomorrow? No darling, I have to bring to the car for service, plus the traffic is always crowded on Saturday. No darling, not even if you volunteer to drive. WAIT till Sunday. Can't you wait two more days?!"

No, mother, I can't!! I'm sooooo miserable right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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[milky_haven]

Yep. He might remember that he has a brother name Thor. He might remember that Veur is Thor but not his brother. Or he might remember... everything. ;p Mind-boggling, eh?

WHAAAAAAAT YOU MUST WATCH IT ALREADY!!! You know how hard it is for me to not "JAKASDJAJDJAKAKASLKSADASL" with you about Avengers and angsty brotherly love between Thor and Loki!!! Oh well, it's alright. Two more days! And then you can squeal like hell and have your spleen explode from the sheer awesomeness of Loki XD

[nimielle]

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I have no coherence! But I loved it! I must read it again and then leave you a proper comment, but right now I have SO MUCH LOVE for Loki!!!! And for Thor and for your atmosphere!! You just immerse your readers into your writing and I absolutely love it!! ♥

[milky_haven]

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DARLING DARLING MY SWEET I MISS YOU SO MUCH IT BURNS

How are you dearest? How's everything? Goodness just a moment ago I was thinking about you and I thought I want to inbox you just to say hi! *snuggles you*

[nimielle]

I've missed you too!!

Why don't update your LJ with RL things?

You can ALWAYS message me! :D I'd like that very much! I'm good, writing my smoochfest and somehow finding myself mostly writing about my OCs... O.o I should just allow myself to write original fiction about them! *lol*

Also OMG AVENGERS!!! HOW COOL ARE THEY?! I've seen the movie twice already and am going to see it again on Sunday, SO MUCH AWESOME!! :D

*snuggles back*

[milky_haven]

I'VE WATCHED AVENGERS THRICE and I'm going to watch it again this weekend woohoooo! Loki is just too adorable and I love it so damn much when Thor was cupping Loki's head and he looks torn between wanting to kiss hug Loki or smash his head with Mjolnir.

Thor and his sentiments. Uh my heart! And that time when Thor was pissed with Banner for insulting Loki, I just want Thor to declared "HE'S MY BETROTHED! HOW DARE YOU!!!" XDDDDDDD (maybe I shall write a fic of that muaaahahaaahaha)

I'm too shy to talk about my RL. I'll bore my LJ friends with pharmaceutical chemistry and microbiology rant and you wouldn't want to know bout those heinous stuff! Sometimes I wonder why I study those. And from now on, I shall bother you as much as I could through inbox XD

ps. Can I marry your icon?

[fantastique]

sadfhsjagdak.

This was utter perfection. I loved every word, every sentence. I loved Loki in there and how Thor is like 'I hate him' when they talk about Loki's brother, knowing that he's part of Loki's past actions as well.

Very well written <3

[milky_haven]

Aww bb thank you so much! Gosh I'm flattered! And yes, Thor really hate himself because he knew he is to be blamed that had led them to be in such conditions, especially Loki's. To Thor, this is the ultimate punishment for himself.

*glomps you*

[fantastique]

You're welcome! Just saying the truth, you know :D. I really like that version of Thor because I really think that deep down Thor knows exactly that he played a huge part in his brother's madness. And that is why your story feels kinda real.
Oh and I loved that Loki felt like he didn't even want to remember his past as if he sensed it was bad.

Oh those two are so angsty together - my absolutely favourite pairing!

*clings*

[nathcoelho]

omg! awesome!! this sure should have a sequel! great! *_*

[milky_haven]

I wish I could offer a sequel but I don't think I will since I have like... several stories to complete -_-;;

Anyway, thank you so much for your lovely feedback my dear. *glomps you*

[nathcoelho]

i hope i can read some other fics of yours! =) i liked your style! =**
have a nice weekend! =)

[milky_haven]

ASAKALADJLSKJDLAAKSLA I love your Sherlock/Cumberbatch icon. *giggles*

If you haven't check them out and wish to read some of my previous fics, you can read this, which is about Thor travels into Loki’s subconscious mind to seek his downfall. But what he finds is Loki’s deepest desire.

and if you have preference with Thorki romance in Edwardian period, read this. It is still incomplete. I just posted two chapters but I'm warning you, they are extremely wordy... the word counts for the entire two chapters is 15k. *sheepish smiles*

Have a happy weekend to you too love. <3

[japankasasagi]

I'm sorry that I can't leave any fascinating comment, just that I still love your writing! The way you've written Loki, in fragments that go day-to-day rather than a continuous timeline, really *feels* like his amnesia, and his wondering if his brother is looking for him, or even wants him, is so sad. I'm so glad you share your writing with us, thank you! I will have to admit, I still love your Edwardian romance, and hope you continue it, but all your writing is lovely.

[milky_haven]

Don't worry darling, I will never give up on my Edwardian fic. It's my baby and tbh, it's my first serious Thorki fic! I'm trying to take it slow with the fic so that it goes exactly how I want it to be (though the problem now is I already started writing the sequel oh dear!) It should be that I finish the Infinity story then I can write the sequel instead, it went the other round now. -_-;;

Anyway, thank you so much for your lovely feedback. I'm so glad you love this little piece. I know that there are a lot of great amnesia!Loki fics out there but just knowing that you love this too really brightened my day! =D