Update - A Gift From Above - Chapter 7

Jul 04, 2010 19:29


Title: A Gift from Above
Author: Milena D.
Rating: T for now
Genre: Romance/Action/Adventure, etc. Daniel/Vala all the way ;)
SPOILERS: HUGE SPOILERS FOR DOMINION!!!
Summary:  Something went wrong and they’ve paid for it.

Author’s Note: Before reading this chapter, I would suggest rereading Chapter 4 because the flashback is relevant to this chapter ( Read more... )

[fics: sg-1] daniel/vala

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space00 July 5 2010, 18:27:32 UTC
I was about to go to bed as its just gone 1am here, and I thought 'lemme go check out Gab's LJ'
And there it was! chapter 7!

Loved it so much, been waiting for at least 4 hours since your email!

so, I'm off to bed now, to dream.

see ya tomorrow!!

Space :)

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milena_d July 9 2010, 03:03:51 UTC
Yay!! :D I'm glad you got a nice pre-bed surprise! I love getting those! ^_^ Thanks for reading and reviewing! Btw, I saw your message on the thread, is everything okay? :( (the epilogue will be up in a couple hours if you need a pick-me-up!:))

Gab

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campylobacter July 6 2010, 03:18:46 UTC
an incongruent-looking Dr. Lam in full off-world gear
Why does that turn me on?

Samantha gave a strained smile of support, some shades of hurt she couldn't help not quite clearing from her eyes.
Oh Sam. Absent fathers. :-(

"you really are a full-fledged, card-carrying, pie-baking, time-out-giving Mom, aren't you?"
Mitchell is the funnest character to write dialog for, EVAR!!!! Lovely Team moments all 'round.

"I'd just be left with the memory of five years of bitterness without a cause to attribute it to."
This is exactly what bothered me about erasing Cam's false memory in "Collateral Damage".

her memories had been loaded from a cartridge Daniel personally handled with extreme care
Oh, the plotbunnies this inspires! The PORNO cartridge! If it were me instead of Daniel, I'd've been watching that cartridge ALL the time. ;-D

the man could throw seventeen arguments in the span of time it took a normal person to say "hello".
LOLOL Trueness.

his eyes hovering unseeing somewhere near her waistThe symbolism here is shockingly powerful ( ... )

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milena_d July 9 2010, 03:15:15 UTC
Hee *bouncy with joy* Oh, long!reviews, how they bring me joy :D

Why does that turn me on?

Lol! Judging by your LJ title, I get the feeling it doesn't take too much ;)

Mitchell is the funnest character to write dialog for, EVAR!!!! Lovely Team moments all 'round.

RIGHT!? I feel so much more comfortable writing him, I always look forward to it :P

This is exactly what bothered me about erasing Cam's false memory in "Collateral Damage".

Ditto. Unless you wipe everything at all pertaining to everything that happened, you're going to have a big question mark nagging at you forever and ever...

Oh, the plotbunnies this inspires! The PORNO cartridge! If it were me instead of Daniel, I'd've been watching that cartridge ALL the time. ;-D

*iz so very shamed at not having thought of that* Dude. Although technically since the memories are from her point of view, he would only have seen himself mostly :P Could freak him out :P

Where's that blunt force trauma when ya need it, huh? I totally understand Vala wanting to whump Daniel earlier. ( ... )

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bkwurm1 July 9 2010, 01:50:05 UTC
That hug was so very satisfying and yet bittersweet for all the time lost and of course I fully expect some possible bump in the road before all is really well.

Poor, poor Daniel. Yes poor Vala, but Daniel actually knew how much was lost in addition to his worst fear coming true.

It hurts so good.

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milena_d July 9 2010, 03:17:42 UTC
That hug was so very satisfying and yet bittersweet for all the time lost and of course I fully expect some possible bump in the road before all is really well.

*cuddles comment* That was exactly what I was going for, thank you ^_^

Poor, poor Daniel. Yes poor Vala, but Daniel actually knew how much was lost in addition to his worst fear coming true.

My thoughts exactly. :) Vala had to suffer through betrayal but then resignation to a life without the people she loved, Daniel never allowed himself that resignation because he knew he could fix it if he had a chance. *pets poor Dannyboy*

It hurts so good.

Thank you :D Epilogue up in a bit!

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natalia5345 October 3 2010, 01:41:21 UTC
“Wow,” Cam broke the silence, a teasing grin on his lips, “you really are a full-fledged, card-carrying, pie-baking, time-out-giving Mom, aren’t you?”
I heart you cameron mitchell.

dear dr. lam, you can be awfully fraking blunt can't you. love it.

“Hey, I’m the resident expert at this.” Cam protested. “Ask anyone. I’ve had my brain scrambled by this thing more than most people combined.”

“Your level of brain damage is not really setting my concerns at ease, Cameron.” Vala retorted sardonically but let him place the sticky tape with the electrodes on various parts of her head.

“Aw, come on, Dorothy. Where’s your sense of adventure?” He grinned.
WIN

AHHH FINALLY THE MEMORY! OMG SO FULL OF AWESOMENESS AND WIN AND SNARK AND CUTE AND HOT AND AMAZING

you just win.
have i mentionned I love you?

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