[Fic] Jealousy - PoT, ShishiTori, 15/?

[miko_no_da]

Title: Jealousy
Series: Prince of Tennis
Pairing: ShishiTori, Tori/?
Rating: Eventual NC-17
Word Count: chapter = 4912 fic so far = 60,831
Summary: Sometimes you don't appreciate the value of what you've got, until you don't have it any more.

Comments

[erin_patty]

I am at work so the comment needs to be short and fast. I loved it. The final couple paragraphs were really well done. I can`t wait to read the next part. Keep up the amazing work!

[miko_no_da]

Wow, you read really fast. o.O

[stolen_hybris]

*sigh* Wow, that was intense! And God, I love this fic.

[miko_no_da]

*laughs* Still lots more to go, though we're nearing the end now.

[padfut_n_prongs]

o__O! I'm shaking with excitement or anticipation(sp)! *bitch kicks the RHPS for suddenly popping into her head*

*tackleglomps shishido from behind* good boy! x__X *smacks the back of his head* but don't do that again, my nervers can't take it a 2nd time. XD;;;;

o///o but man, i wan't them to kiss even if it owuld have been like that damn apple from the garden. X3 forbidden fruit /is/ suposed to be better <.< ... >.>

*glomps you* think about this chapter is SO going to get me thru those evil hours i have to spend with my cousins tomorrow! *tackleglomps* T__T THANK YOU~! <3

[miko_no_da]

I want them to kiss too, damn it. ;p I had to remind myself several times that just because I want them to do it does NOT mean it would be in character for them to do it. ;ppp

RHPS?

[padfut_n_prongs]

^_^; rocky horror picture show. sorry, it was a reference to the anticipation(sp)

maybe a dream where they can kiss and then feel guilty that they had a dream like that?

[blackbloodrunya]

Ah yes XD Sexual Tension. I love the intensity, and the high-strung emotions when they were THAT close to each other, talking. You should have seen me! I was like, 'SNAP! SNAP!' at the tension, waiting for one of them to break it. But making them pull away is a clever move!! It makes everything that comes after more interesting *grins* I admire at their perseverence, BOTH of them. Sometimes hormones can be really evil O___o

And I LOVE the way you wrote the match. You sound like such an expert OMG >_> I damn well couldn't ignore the details! <3 *glomps you*

[miko_no_da]

*snickers* 175+ eps of tenipuri and six months of tennis lessons does not make me any kind of expert... but it gives me lots of terminology to throw in to make it SOUND like I know what I'm talking about! ^___^

[kimutheemu]

0.0 *can't breathe* <3

[miko_no_da]

o.O *offers oxygen*