[Fic] Jealousy - PoT, ShishiTori, 10/?

[miko_no_da]

Yay, I got a Sunday update out despite family stuff! Before midnight, even. *grins* Possibly at least one more chapter tomorrow, though I really do need to turn my attention to some of my other poor, neglected stories

Comments

[andartha]

The scene at the door had my eyes going moist.
I liked the fact that Ohtori isn't making this easy for Shishido. Hurt takes time and effort to heal. Shishido's moving in the right direction so far though. Still, I somehow suspect that the next chapter(s) will bring a few surprises for the two of them.

[miko_no_da]

No, Ohtori's planning to put Shishido through just as much hell as Shishido made him go through. Ohtori's trust is nearly infinite, but when someone DOES manage to break it, well... Ohtori's not really a person you want to cross.

[jynx]

*SQUEES*

OMG! YOU! *points* YOU! You had me on the edge of my seat, LITERALLY. College desk chairs are not comfortable litle things, but nonetheless.

....*SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEE*

...yes, that is all I have to say. I'm a little too....well....vibrating. Let's just say I'm vibrating at the moment.

[miko_no_da]

*giggles and offers a cushion to make the chair more comfortable*

[jynx]

*giggles* I keep meaning to BUY one, but it makes no sense to ^_^

[aiwritingfic]

Well this one's interesting ... what's next? :)

[miko_no_da]

*wanders off whistling innocently*

[pixiesmith]

Oooh, I am so happy. You don't know how terribly, terribly happy I am to read this chapter.

I've recently been reading your chapters in dread (not that I mean it in a bad way of course) almost afraid to read what other torture you've managed to put my favourite boys through, but finally, finally, things are beginning to look sweeter.

I was just so happy Shishido was willing to give up everything to have Ohtori take him back, even his place on the high school tennis team. It was such a significant moment and you drew it out nicely.

Hopefully things will get better from here. I look forward to more wonderful work from you.

pixie

ps - thank you for getting the chapters out so quickly. You're a totally speedy writer and let me tell you, I absolutely appreciate it from the bottom of my heart.

[miko_no_da]

I am a very fast writer when I first start working on something. Later... not so much. *sheepishly looks at the PSME thing still in progress a year and a half later* Which is why I try to finish things quickly, BEFORE moving on to something else.

[idimmu]

Fics like this make me wonder why I drifted out of the fandom for so long there. Not that I ever write for PoT, but the fics. *wibbles* Not even my OTP (but you have that in here too *luffs on the AtoJi*). But still. I've read all this in one sitting while waiting for the turkey to finish, and yeah, I loved it.

[miko_no_da]

Sunao-ko! *pounces on the icon*

I've never been much for 'fandom' as an entity... too much drama. But there will always be good fics out there if you know where to look for them, so it's worth it to hang around the edges of fandom. I'm glad mine was one of those for you!