[cm fic] leave a mark, h/r, R.

May 29, 2007 20:52

Title: Leave a mark.
Pairing: Hotch/Reid
Rating: R
WC: 553
Spoilers: post LDSK.
AN: so I’m sure many people have done post LDSK fic but I’m new to the pairing so I’m testing out the waters. Still not right with Hotch’s voice. Feedback of all kinds would be lovely :D

They flare and fade. They break. )

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siggen1 May 29 2007, 11:42:01 UTC
Oh, this was... I don't really have words, right now. I'll... I'll comment later, when I'm more coherent.

Incoherency? Is GOOD.

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mijmeraar May 31 2007, 12:31:30 UTC
I'm glad you liked it :D consider all the reid/hotch fics i write for you, because you got me into this show, made me consider this pairing, and then - lo and behold - LIKE this pairing ;) ♥

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nebula99 May 29 2007, 12:00:43 UTC
very good, I liked this a lot.

and I think you are doing just fine with Hotch's voice.

there can never be too much Hotch/Reid

I asked for more last time you wrote and I got it. Even more?

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nycene May 29 2007, 20:55:36 UTC
i concur, there can never be too much hotch/reid

i liked this too....they are both so damaged and so self aware - you capture it beautifully.

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mijmeraar May 31 2007, 12:33:50 UTC
i really, really wasn't sure about this piece so thank you so much. I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it :)

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mijmeraar May 31 2007, 12:32:37 UTC
i'm glad to hear I didn't desecrate Hotch's character, he's definitely a tricky one. haha, i'll do my best to post more in the near future :D thanks you so much.

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mijmeraar May 31 2007, 12:36:16 UTC
thank you very much :D I've got some reid/morgan pieces in my memories that aren't flocked or anything, if you like the pairing. this is actually, funnily enough, the first angsty type piece I've written for the fandom. glad you liked it!

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bergann May 29 2007, 12:50:42 UTC
Oh wow, this was wonderful. Loved it ♥

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mijmeraar May 31 2007, 12:36:53 UTC
thank you very much :D

your icon is intoxicating.

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fireness May 29 2007, 14:34:56 UTC
Nice fic. A couple of typos, though, one of which will give me cross-over nightmares for a while XD only a sheen of sweat and pink, fading marks on his skin, Spender’s hand. Should say Spencer, I believe. Don't know if you know much about X-Files, but there you are XD

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mijmeraar May 31 2007, 12:43:50 UTC
haha oh man, thanks for catching that. I don't know XFILES at all, but I'll apologise for the mix up regardless ;) thanks for reading.

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