Title: Seeking Heat
Author:
miera_cEpisodes: "The Storm" and "The Eye"
Summary:
notjustclosets fic for these two episodes
Pairings: Weir/Sheppard
Main characters: Weir, Sheppard
Rating: R
Warnings: non-explicit sexual content
Spoilers: For the two episodes in question
Beta:
melyanna and
grav_ityDisclaimer: The Stargate universe belongs to a lot of people who are not me. More's the
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Ow. And, well, yes. It was all description! There was no dialogue and I was worried it was going to fall flat since it was just "he did this and then she did that" over and over. *ducks*
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It was slower but somehow deeper than the other kisses had been, with a hunger and an intent that hadn't been there before.
Great line!
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She swallowed, caught on the precipice for a moment, but she remembered how his skin tasted, and she wondered if his mouth would taste of the rain too.
I love the description of John tasting like rain. It's beautiful on its own, but also reminds me of a song by my favorite band ("You Look Like Rain" by Morphine), which makes me extra happy.
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Having them remain silent through practically all of it struck just the right tone. Everything's still so raw and they're just not ready to talk yet. They're still thawing out from the numb chill and need to be able to feel, first. Loved it!
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Yes, this is definitely a post-traumatic influenced moment where Elizabeth just can't talk and John can't keep up his usual mask. *nods firmly*
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