fic: Seeking Heat

[miera_c]

Title: Seeking Heat
Author: miera_c
Episodes: "The Storm" and "The Eye"
Summary: notjustclosets fic for these two episodes
Pairings: Weir/Sheppard
Main characters: Weir, Sheppard
Rating: R
Warnings: non-explicit sexual content
Spoilers: For the two episodes in question
Beta: melyanna and grav_ity
Disclaimer: The Stargate universe belongs to a lot of people who are not me. More's the

Comments

[lone_pyramid]

Hot damn, woman.

The sex was hot, but Elizabeth practically climbs into his lap and John just holds her... yeah. That's there in their relationship in the way they look at each other and how they might be if/when they're just too tired to do that whole denial thing they're so good at.

And uncertain!John is just yummy.

[miera_c]

but Elizabeth practically climbs into his lap and John just holds her... yeah

*g*
I had that idea way back in S1, but then I kind of went a different direction with the "Post-The Eye Quadrilogy" and never got back to it. Then of course I had to figure out how PTSD shaking transitioned to sex.

And uncertain!John is just yummy

He's totally freaked out here. But, hey, sex! Not gonna say no.

[peanutbutterer]

He'd never called her by her first name before. In all the months they'd been in Atlantis, even with the extraordinary series of near-death events, he'd never said her name before.

She certainly hadn't imagined him saying it like this.

Lies. She totally had! *g*

I love the tone of this. It's so quiet I could practically hear the rain falling. =)

Poor worried John. Cuddling makes it better. Just shut up and hold her.

[miera_c]

Poor worried John. Cuddling makes it better. Just shut up and hold her.

Yep. In my head they both fall asleep, Elizabeth leaning on his shoulder and John's head back against the wall, his chin resting on Elizabeth's hair. :)

[bubu70]

I had butterflies in my stomach the whole time through this...
Every once in a while, I had to stop and re-read something... to savour it...

Plain beautiful. Possibly the best J/E first-time I ever read... bonus for me, happening just after my fav episode...

my favourite parts are: 1.the whole passage before they kiss...very sensual…. 2. the fact that they don't really have sex and the way they are tentative around each other. Also, I find the way you make Elizabeth take the initiative and John accepting it, in a kind of eager way, both spot on character and timeline, as well as amazingly intriguing.

uhm... how about a sequel with them dealing to file this just as a post-traumatic thing and having to deal with it, further on the 2 or 3 season?

or.. how about a sequel anyway?

thanks!

[miera_c]

thanks!

[odakota_rose]

*brain melts into a bubbling puddle*
gah.

[miera_c]

*g* thanks. I think. ;)

[odakota_rose]

:D
it's a good thing ;)

[lanna_kitty]

*is FINALLY catching up on the smut she missed*

Woah.

wow. Wait this was the one you were worried over? O.o *flails*

ok, I loved Elizabeth's freaked out reaction to the events of the ep. So very real. And I love protective John who's completely worried and a little awkward and unsure and not the best at talking. I love how they just stop talking because they don't need to.

For some reason I also really like that Elizabeth was the instigator, ;).

This was excellent. :D

[miera_c]

Wait this was the one you were worried over?

*sigh* I'm never going to hear the end of that am I.