Midnight and Dawn (10/13)

[closeurmouth]

Title: Midnight and Dawn
Authors: e and hopeandmemory
Rating: NC-17 (for sex and violence)
Overall Word Count: 36283
Warnings: Whatever you'd reasonably expect to see on western television in a crime drama will be found in this fic. If you are easily triggered by material referenced (but rarely explicitly shown) in these kinds of programs, you might want to

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[insomnia_yuenyi]

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...dying x-x

Cliff hangers will be the death of me, I swear. But once again, amazing!! I love this idea of two different people sharing one body. Feeling really, really bad for Heechul though D:

I love how there's lots of details for the main characters' personalities, it makes the plot a hundred times more exciting *-*

Will look forward to tomorrow's update ^^

[hopeandmemory]

You have me to blame for the cliffhangers, since I'm the one who divided up the chapters. (We basically wrote all of this in one document and split the chapters at the end, haha.) Sorry! OTL

Heechul is a little rough around the edges (to say the least), but I'm glad to hear he's inspired a little pity. He's had a rough few years since his undercover mission, and it's just now coming back to bite him in the ass.

Oh, trust me, we've planned out so much of this down to the last detail. Wait until we start posting outtakes and backstory scenes. xD

Thank you for the comment! <3

[insomnia_yuenyi]

S'alright, it definitely makes me come back for more ;]

I look forward to seeing the explanations, cause my own assumptions are driving myself nuts xDD

[s00_kie]

omagah omagah heenim!!! DDDDDD8 he's prob gonna kicked jungmo agagagaga you make me hates lady heehee~ > < you guys are really good at this..love the story, plot n the flow..but seriously, the ending makes me scream n crying at the same time :"(

[hopeandmemory]

Yeaaaaah, I think he's gonna be less than thrilled that Jungmo just tried to smother Heehee... and by proxy, Heechul. xD

Thanks for the comment, glad you're enjoying this!

[junjou_robotica]

“He’s fucking her, you know. After everything I told him, he’s still fucking her.”

This is another 'Jungmo, what am I even going to do with you?' thing. But seriously. What is he even doing? I have this uncomfortable feeling about Jungmo fucking HeeHee, especially since she's using Heechul's body against his will. Also I want to know how Jay created her.

“Donghae, you were twenty-three and they were torturing you. You didn’t know.”

Donghae :/ We do get to know about him, right?

“I will beat the crap out of you if I have to watch Heechul upchuck yet another meal because he wakes up knowing that Heehee fucked someone last night. He had to wake up to that every morning when he was with Youngwoon. Never knowing who he was, where he was, who Youngwoon had made him--”

But I love how protective Donghae is of Heechul, and I'm really curious as to why it seems like they'd do anything for each other.

She sniffs. “I don’t really care. And I like it when Youngwoon has you all running around--it means he gets tired more easily, and I can pop

[hopeandmemory]

I have this uncomfortable feeling about Jungmo fucking HeeHee, especially since she's using Heechul's body against his will.

exactly. exactly. that's what squicked me out most about their relationship, the sort of rape implication of doing things to heechul's body without heechul consciously there. very good of you to pick up on that!

i have all of donghae's backstory hashed out, it just needs to be written into a proper narrative format. we're going to work on the outtakes as soon as we've finished posting the full story. :)

That'll be why Heechul never does any work, then.

Do you mean like, in general? Or why he's all exhausted now that Heehee's come out to play? Because I will say that his reluctance to do anything in the early parts of the story is honestly because he doesn't give a fuck, rofl, not because of Heehee.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I love seeing these long, quotey comments. :D

[junjou_robotica]

It's really kind of :/ Poor Heechul~

fjkbngjkbjknthjkthjknt I want to know all about it; I'm so curious.

Ah, my brain just picked that part out as him not doing any work because he tends to over-work himself when he does, and it makes him exhausted, which gives HeeHee free reign to run about in his body getting up to stuff.

Aha, I do them because I'm terrible at leaving concrit, but I know that I personally prefer getting longer comments~ ♥

[hopeandmemory]

btw I forgot to add - I LOVE YOUR DONGHAE ICON. a;dkja;sldfj why is he so cute, fishy oppar is best oppar. <3

yeah - you'll notice that's why he's not sleeping much, either. the longer he stays awake, the longer he can stave off heehee.

i think your concrit is just fine. :P we love any kind of feedback! <3

[starbursts132]

just....wow. 0_0 these updates are really becoming something i look forward to every day. i'll be a little disappointed when it's all over. =(

before now, i always felt kind of sorry for Heehee. I just thought that she must have felt so neglected and unloved because Heechul never let her out. But now, i see why Heechul tried so hard to not let her out. She's crazy. Or maybe just mean. Why does she hate Heechul so much? she really does do everything she does just to fuck with him. >:(

damn cliffhangers. i want to know what Heechul's going to do now.

great work. It's brilliant.

[hopeandmemory]

I know. :/ BUT! There are lots of outtakes to look forward to, so please keep following the comm! We'll be posting side stories and backstory in the next few weeks, since we've got a LOT of this universe hashed out. :)

If you remember from a few chapters back when Heehee's in the car with Jungmo, she mentions why she is so angry at Heechul (and Jay, for that matter): "... Jay’s told me all about [Heechul], though. I hated Jay for that. It’s not really fair that [Heechul] gets everything, and I’m supposed to be happy with just--” They used her and then shut her away when Youngwoon was behind bars. So she wants her turn to live again. I think Heechul hides away some of his anger about his undercover mission and it really fuels a lot of Heehee's more vindictive behaviors.

You'll find out more tomorrow. ;)

Thank you for reading and commenting!! <3

[alien_erika]

Hey
I've been reading this fic since yesterday, I love the plot, the split personality, just everything about this fic<3
this is my fav suju fic so far, since I just got into suju this year, I realised there were not many well written fics, and your writing is amazing! And also thanks to u I have a new OTP xD
Anyways hate cliffies ;(

[hopeandmemory]

That's a lot to get through in one day, so cheers for reading so much of this! :D

I only got into Suju in February or March, so I'm fairly new to the fandom as well. Thankfully canttakeabreath is a massive SJ stan so anything I'm not sure about, she's happy to fill in for me, rofl.

Thank you so much for reading, I'm so happy you're enjoying it! :D Next chapter will be posted tomorrow, we'll be all done posting by Sunday!